3 Words

3 Words

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I've been waiting you to tell you these 3 words..

"
Cause I'm flaking my feelings towards you,
I hope they get across successfully.
I've been waiting you to tell you these 3 words.
They mean the world to me,
speaking the hearts of thousands of girls.
Maybe you'll understand,
or you'll leave right away.
Taking those steps out to the world,
or staying in weeping motion.
Young love is sweet, 
like a pink lollipop; 
when's Valentine's Day?
I don't know how to describe,
but I'll tell you the best I can.
The only one waiting, 
is definitely me.
I'll tell the world now,
and only just once.
Please understand;
I'm over you..

© 2011 ☯


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twinkle, this is deeply moving and quite wonderful, i love it. thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! I was so hoping for the not-so-traditional ending and bam! you gave it. Excellent work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was an unexpected ending but I loved it all the more. Loved the wording you used and i can completely understand the situation as well. Great peice. keep writing


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a cool piece. awesome wording and the twist of events on the last line is definitely something to appreciate. keep writing, mi amiga :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm, and here I thought it was going to be 'I love you' Guess it shows us not to assume, ehh?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a surprising ending! loved this.. ALOT!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The end was a twist, but it was a fun little read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I didn expect the "I'm over you". I thought for sure it would say "I love you". Anyway I really liked it. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well nothing I expected, i thought it would have been. "I love you.' but those words are overplayed and this was something new and something I didn't expect. great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The lollipop was interesting because a little voice inside my head said.. she means "this sucks" lol... so the I"m over you made so much sense.. Great write..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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