WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

WHEN I'LL BID ADIEU

A Poem by Saumya
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feelings of a student about saying goodbye to the school where she had studied for 14 years!!!!!!

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  When one day passes,
The other comes,
Everything changes,
Leaving some,
The 'LOVE', the 'CARE', the 'concern' and
'JOY', that I have received here, was a great fun.

Now has the day come to bid Adieu,
To these wonderful feelings I received.
When I remember, those days so sweet,
When I was a kid of four or five!!
My school taught me, the "ART OF LIFE"..

The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first to me unknown,
My teachers and parents made to me known.

Now, today, after days long back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,

Besides those scoldings those days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY CHEEKS' .

Time has passed, and I have grown,
No more swings, and no more rhymes,
but its not that, that there's no fun.
When today,I look at the children so cute,
Of three, or four, or five of age:
I can perceive the ART OF LIFE;
It's nothing great, but only this,
"WHEN YOU LIVE, DAY TO DAY;
LIVE TO GIVE, because , the MORE YOU
GIVE, THE MORE YOU LIVE !!!

MY teachers also taught me a wonderful thing;
about success; that,
"DO ANYTHING; but with THE WILL TO WIN".

I hope what i want to say is--
"WHEN YOU LIVE DAY TO DAY ;
Don't live by what people, remark or say;
"BUT, LIVE BY WHAT YOU KNOW IS
TRUE."

Finally to conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!

© 2017 Saumya


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Saumya
please do comment if you think it was worth reading........i hope you'll love it

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Awww.............. very cute, but it made me sad! I loved this poem! *tear* I think my friend may be feeling the same way. She had to leave our school system because her family had to move, and she mooovvvveeeedddd reeeaaaaaallllllyyyyyy fffffaaaaaarrrr aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy. But, she'll be going back to our school next year, so YAY! One question... Is the poem about you, or somebody else?

Posted 11 Years Ago


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it was definitely worth reading and brought back memories of my high school days. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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"The more you give, the more you live." I like that. :)

As for missing school, isn't school starting up here again pretty soon ? And yes, teachers are quite wonderful. While I have almost always enjoyed the classes they teach, I must confess, I was rather fond of my math teacher beyond simple calculi back in 4th grade. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

o wow, really lovely to know that you had such greatly friendly teachers to help you my friend:)
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dw817

11 Years Ago

Looks like the "read more" error nailed you. In any case, I understand. It's funny, when you're a ki.. read more
Saumya

11 Years Ago

lol..yes,got nailed up with the "read more" error here:) well, the further part of the comment was,.. read more
Was this your project that made your school magazine. If it is it truly deserved to be

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

yes:) you r right Brian:) thanks a lot for the appreciation:)

The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first to me unknown,
My teachers and parents made to me known.
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The way to 'sit', the way to 'stand', the way to
'take', the way to 'understand'
All of this, which were first unknown to me,
My teachers and parents made known to me.
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Now, today, after days long back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Now, today, after days longing back,
When i sit and remember those lovely days,
I can deeply feel the love, care and concern,
----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Besides those scoldings those days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY CHEEKS' .
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Besides those scoldings days.
I also remember those, swings so sweet,
The lovely flowers, and rhymes so sweet,
like 'TWINKLE-TWINKLE' and 'CHUBBY
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Finally to conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!
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Finally conclude, I'd only say;
"O my lovely school, and wonderful
Teachers,
When I'll adieu ;
I'll really, really, really,
MISS YOU!!!!!!!!

Again another tribute...a speech to the class...and again theme is the same...as with the rest I've read so far...inspiring write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you soo much Glen:)
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

I wanted to give you a review...better than rushing into all of them...next time one at a time...and.. read more
Awwww this was really great!!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Saumya

11 Years Ago

thank you Rosaria:)
Not just another pin in the cushion of "I grew up" poetry. Gripping, to the point where I would like to know more. Like how you perceived time during your happier days instead of the reminiscence of it all. Very good read, above par, and what have you.

Zackery Daley

Posted 11 Years Ago


A touching adieu. Life is a journey, which takes us to different places and introduces us to many people, some of them we forget, some stays in our heart forever.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sad truth in life is that change is inevitable. This made me a little sad but it also illustrates reality.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This brought back memories of teachers that I absolutely loved. I think about my fourth grade teacher Ms. Mundy who made sure I was the best me I could be; and who loved her students so much that she became a fifth grade teacher and had the same class the next school year. I think about my 11th grade teacher Ms. Larossa who enjoyed my slavery poem so much that she had it submitted to the school's literary magazine; which inspired me to take my writing to a new level. And my 12th grade English teacher who always enjoyed my writing, whether it be a report, or a monologue.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Goodbyes are always so sad. As we grow up, and leave childhood behind us, there are many goodbyes...but we must remember, for everyone of these sad goodbyes, there is a brand new "hello"...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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