A letter To GOD....

this is a letter to GOD, on behalf of all human beings to show our love and concern for him..and ask some important question regarding the life today

O God, you are the one,
closest to our hearts...!!
our Angel in pain, and
redeemer in life's game;
without whom, living this life, for us,
is in vain..!!

You, are the one,
who knows, everything about us,
therefore, in real,
you only, are our best friend.
The one, who carefully listens to us,
and, puts us away, from, Life's TENSIONS,
by showering, rays of innocence, and diligence..!

O  GOD, my friend,
everyone  changes with the trend;
but you are the one, always with us, like
a great friend..!!

I ask, you answer;
i pray, you cherish;
i am defeated, you console me,
i am hopeless, you give me hope,
i am rejected, you give me the ways,
how my real talents can be showcased..
All of which, that, only a best friend,
and parents,
in this world, do for their children,
and friend..
therefore, you are a fine blend ,of
parents and friends;
whom, these  mere words, can't afford to define,
as,YOU and your powers are immense.....!!!

But, my dear friend, i write this letter to you today,
to ask ,some common questions, which is perturbing
human beings today;
they are the ones, whose answers seems,
uncertain,
so, my friend, i hope, you can surely answer
these, then.....

why are the poor, being rejected, and the
rich upgraded......??????
why are the girls, in our society, physically
defeated, and ill-treated by men......?????
why can't children, care , for their
older parents..???
Why is corruption, in this world
so prevalent..???
Will peace, come to this world  again.??

and most importantly.................

Will the world, really end....!!?

O God, these are some questions, which
make, we humans, disillusioned;
Therefore, answering these for you is really important;
because, we consider you as our dearest friend,
so, i know, you will definitely  calm our curiosity,
by answering these questions..

At last, I'd like to thank you ,my friend,
for, patiently, listening to the pathetic condition '
of we humans,
who are really disturbed, by these dreadful conditions,
and hope, that you will shortly
answer these question..

To conclude this, I'd say, that,
o God, we human beings really adore you,
urge you to take care, wish you a calm goodbye,
and heartly wish, that, may your glory always, gleam
in heaven...!!
     
        thannking you,

yours lovingly daughter and friend,
saumya

Author's Note

i hope you would really love and enjoy, reading this
pleeeeeeeeeeeassssssee do rate and comment..!!

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

this is lovely and sweet. i think we all need to step back and appreciate the blessings that we have even when we question them or are unsure. my only criticism recurring in your work is that your punctuation is distracting. you don't need to use so many !!!!!! or ?????? one will usually suffice, maybe two to get a point across. otherwise- your messages are incredibly positive and your outlook on life is so refreshing. great work!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"A letter of GOD'
Saumya,
The world is so big and amazing. Humanity and creation: the heavens, and every experience of our lives lived. It seems that in all of this is design speaking truth. Are we really our own? Are really simply a result of our own making?
Thoughts of a creator and Savior has been around since the beginning of time. Why?
Is it in our very design? This thumbprint?
YOur poem is very interesting and thoughtful as it shows a heart which is open to the possibility that you are a God thing. Maybe if we are open this God will approach us if we acknowledge and want to ask and approach Him. Beautiful ponderings in your words.
Kathy

[Saumya]

Hey Kathy!😊
So glad to see your in-depth review for this poem! Thankyou so much for reading & reviewing it honestly! I muchly appreciate that :)

I wrote this poem, when I was almost a kid, very new to writing *smile* reading this poem after these many years makes me giggle and smile, for childish my writings were then, and still I got many appreciative & encouraging reviews here! 😊 Truly, encouragement does wonders, and review & reviewers like you, truly inspire us so much. 💖💖💕

(((HUGS))))

Fondly,
Saumya.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Saumya,
Life is full of unlimited surprises an little gifts to live and ponder. It's nice to share and learn from each other. Brain storm and just compare notes. This goes for seeing the newness and joy of youth.
Bless you.
Kathy

[mark]

well written poem/letter to god. so much meaning and truthful words. i enjoyed reading it. Great write, well done :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Great theme and very expressive :)
This is really beautifully involved questionnaire and you kept your feeling in this poem - Saumya
great efforts and properly executed. Use of colors made it expressive and more appealing :)
- Singh :)

[Dayran]

Some simple questions that begins a life of inquiry and search for meaning and truth.

My suggestions for improving are as follows:

1. Viewing God as friend brings a sense of equal responsibility. What have you done for the problems listed?

2. The idea of God as an entity exists on a different plane from the human. Our view would certainly be different from his. How have you made adjustments for these?

3. In communication, the communicator is obviously in contact with some experience of divinity. It would help to convey this through your emotions in the poem rather than treat the God idea as your headmaster in school.

Hope these help you in your writing. A nice effort but there's room for improvement.

[prachi prangya agasti]

sweet and nice topic...!!!

[TL Boehm]

Nicely done. So much easier for God to work when we are grateful than when we are complaining although He can handle that too.

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
I honestly don't know what to say without offending you here.

God is - silent. Maybe you have an answer why, I certainly don't. There is a song called, "God is watching us - from a distance." Perhaps it applies. It could be that God is not aware of the suffering going on in the Earth, quite simply because he =IS= watching us from a distance.

Men- and women-kind will suffer and continue to suffer. There is no easy solution. We have our own ideas about afterlife, judgement, Karma, and so forth. But the fact of the matter is, nothing works better than honest-to-goodness charity and compassion to help others in this world.

I often think of bad people as baobobs from the story by Antoine De Saint-Exupéry's called, "The Little Prince."

It's a good book, one you might enjoy reading, and it might better explain where we fit in the scheme of things, including God.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Little_Prince

[Brian Angeles]

As a Catholic I feel warm hearted about this

[Glen Yumang Manese]

why are the poor, being rejected, and the
rich upgraded......??????
why are the girls, in our society, physically
defeated, and ill-treated by men......?????
why can't children, care , for their
older parents..???
Why is corruption, in this world
so prevalent..???
Will peace, come to this world again.??

and most importantly.................

Will the world, really end....!!?
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why are the poor, being rejected, and the
rich upgraded......??????
the girls, in our society, physically
defeated, and ill-treated by men......?????
Can't children, care , for their
older parents..???
Corruption, in this world
so prevalent..???
Will peace, come to this world again.??

and most importantly.................

Will the world, really end....!!?

Again look into your work and tighten the verse...make the reader consume the write...seems you have a theme with inspiration writes with God...and communion with him...shows a lot in your work...nothing wrong with that...I commend you...