A Tribute To My Readers

A writer is incomplete without the readers, so this is a short tribute to you all....

My dear readers,
I'm grateful to you all,
for being here...

Each time i write a poem,
i earnestly wait,
wait for your reviews,
because, they tell me the depth,
to which my poems are true..!

I never thought,
that I'd write,
but there's a story
a story, behind it,
full of insight,
that makes one smile.
which I'd like
to share with y'all
tonight...

When I was a kid
of twelfth grade,
it was the day, i think,
third or fourth of May,
I remember the day,
I remember the date,
it was the Moral Science
class on 5th of May,
My teacher told us
to write something,
on the topic, `When I'll bid Adieu`
While others wrote
one or two lines,
I was there
with four lines..!
she checked everyone's writing,
by her keen mind,
and intense understanding..
And when she came to me,
and read those four lines,
the situation, i feel was truly divine!

I  know not
what she saw in
those lines,
she came to me,
and urged me,
to complete that poem
By May nine...
the next day, i did it,
and later,
it got published in our
first school magazine,
for the first time..!

Everyone who read,
appreciated it a lot,
and encouraged me
to continue this
great work of mine,
In the coming time.

but all that happened,
was because of Her
my lovely teacher
that time,
who fell in love
with those four lines!

yes, my dear readers,
I'd really love to tell,
that,
if i write well today,
its entire credit goes to her.!!

Then i came here,
and wrote more poems,
and the result i think,
y'all have in front of you!


My dear readers,
i really cherish your presence,
in reading and reviewing my writings,
and i cordially thank you, and wish,
that, in future, you will be even
more supporting.


if i am a poem, you are my words.!
if i am a book, you are the pages.!
So, i request you, to always be
with me,
in this race of chaste,
as a book is empty, without pages,
and a poem, useless, without
words and phrases..!!

    

 

Author's Note

I hope, you will definitely like this....
if yes, then please do review and rate it..!!
thanks a lot for reading..!!

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is lovely truly lovely
I love the way you gave credit to your teacher.
I also did a similar story last week a true story in credit to my 5th grade teacher how odd that we write the same thing
well done
read my story if you like re my 5th grade teacher its all true
love your work keep writing

[Saumya]

Thankyou so much Julie!😊 Very glad you liked the poem .
Send me the link of you're poem too, I'll love to read and review it😊

Fondly,
Saumya

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

just go onto my writing in my name
I think its called 5tth grade teacher

[Saumya]

Done!😊
It was wonferdul reading it.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks !!
I appreciate that

[Saumya]

*smiles* glad you do!💖

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

i just read your poem again and still love it 11 months later :) smiles

[Saumya]

So glad you read it again, dear Julie!💖 I indeed feel more honoured to have written it now😊read moreSo glad you read it again, dear Julie!💖 I indeed feel more honoured to have written it now😊
(((Hugs)))💕

[FlatLineBeauty]

Wonderful and it shows how much your readers mean to you :)

[Saumya]

thanx Rose:)

[Sami Khalil]

Your teacher has lit the fire of your raging talent and your readers now are admiring the rainbows across their skies. I'm one of your fans...:)

[Saumya]

thank you so much Sami:) great to know, that you r one of my fans:)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm . You are welcome...:)

[Anand Sehgal]

don't worry. I am with you. write on :)

[Saumya]

lol...okk:) n what about the poem? u didn't mention whether u liked it or not:)

[Anand Sehgal]

was a very good write indeed :D

[Saumya]

thanks Anand:)

[sivan]

ahhh this is a nice piece it's always nice to know what started a person's creative journey

[Saumya]

thank you sivan:)

[Aziz Luther]

This reminds me of the teacher that inspired me to write. Great story

[Saumya]

thanx Aziz:) glad you could relate:)

[prachi prangya agasti]

thank you for sharing this sweet poem... nice one..

[Saumya]

thanx prachi:)

[TL Boehm]

if I am a poem, you are my words. That's such a great line.

[Saumya]

thanx TL:) am glad ou enjoyed this write:)

[Zero_Edge88]

There, the treasure of friendship, kindness and humanity is given to us once again in these stanzas. Written in sincerity are the words that you posit to us connecting us ever so truthfully and in humility as well. Friendship never thrown out but completely written consistently in these lines, I am grateful of with the way you write your words wrapping us in our heart and soul! So soulful and wonderful. Thank you very much :)

[Saumya]

thank you so so so very much Zero for your lovely words:0 am veery glad you saw the depth and truth behind the words in this write:) thanx again my friend:)

[Brian Angeles]

Im glad she helped you. Now I can read your work. :)

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Pryde Foltz]

This write is full of love. Let's here it for the teachers, Brava.

[Saumya]

thank you:)