I Wish

I wish,
everyone on this earth,
be happy..!
I wish,
no one in this world,
be lonely..!
i wish,
everyone on this earth,
gets what they need..!
I wish,
everyone helps the other,
in need..!
i wish,
everyone be away
from greed..!
i wish,
there be no discrimination, on
the basis of cast, color or creed..!

I wish,
everyone is blessed, with
a best friend in need..!
I wish,
no trees ever be, without
leaves...!
I wish,
everyone be gifted, with
eternal peace...!
I wish,
our earth  be enriched,
with greenery...!

i wish,
everything on this earth be, as
it is supposed to be....!
i wish,
every butterfly,
always spreads peace....!
I wish,
the birds always sing,
melodiously.........!


i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with,  LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!

Author's Note

thank you very much for reading.....
please give your reviews and rate it...!!!

Reviews

[annie lee]

You have described Paradise, and if it existed here on Earth, it would be doubly so. I guess I am too cynical to envision this world, since I am blinded by the way it is today. If everyone had your faith, your integrity, your energy -- maybe it would work. You are a beautiful light and I do not wish to dim that in any way. Hold your lamp high, Saumya, and maybe you can begin to change this world. Brava.

[Kevin Dean]

Again very well said and warm. I would like to see something dark or different from you.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Your poem is as beautiful as a butterfly and as tasty as JILEBI, A SWEET DISH

[Dreamer]

I believe that this poem describes everyone's hopes and feelings, nice work.

[Saumya]

thank you dreamer:)

[Dreamer]

You're welcome!

[Vani Jalagar]

i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with, LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


I too wish the same......and this wonderfully written..your wishes are so altruistic:)

[Saumya]

thank you so much dear:)

[Frieda P]

A perfectly blissful wish list Saumya....well done!

[Saumya]

thanks Frieda:)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

If wishes were horses, beggars might rid. Is never like that. Good one.

[Olivia]

Beautiful, I hope that someday the world be at peace

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I hope your wishes come true! :)

[Mittens]

I really enjoy positive vibes and expressions of general optimism, and that's what you've got going on here. As more of a story writer, I always find it intriguing how poets are capable of playing with the physical layout of their work. The colours you use do a fantastic job of helping to portray the message that you're trying to convey; a lot of the times I've seen situations like this the colours can detract form reading, but you use them very surgically and they definitely enhance the poem.

Very enjoyable; thanks for posting. :)

[Tam Warink]

Excellent and worthy wishes in my opinion. May you always find the right words to right at the right time and in the right place, Saumya. :)

[Saumya]

thank you so much sir for your kind words :)