The People Around..

This is a poem, which consists the description of the variety types of people we are surrounded with....

Have you keenly seen the people around..?
producing diverse effects
on your life's canvas
each and every moment,
with the advent of time.......

Some of them, are
like the cool breeze,
filling us each time,
with optimism and peace..

Some of them, are
like the grand trees,
ever ready to fill us
with their shade and peace....

Some of them, are
like the lovely flowers,
who always turn your sad face
into a smiling flower....

Some of them, are
like the little colorful birds,
who meet you only at times
but make those moments
truly hopeful and divine.......

Some of them, are
like those grand storms,
who cannot and never be judged,
by any norms...
giving sadness in different forms.....

Some of them, are
like those melodious songs
having their own zeal and charm.......

And, some of them,
cannot be really defined,
irritating at times,
interesting the other times...
optimistic at one time,
and a big sadist the other times.......
and this is why its always hard,
to perceive them every time......!

But whats really amazing here's, that
they all leave some, or the other
impact on us each time.....
So love, respect, and enjoy,
everyone's presence around you each time,
Because, we don't ever know,
that what would their existence teach us one time,
and then this same world,
looks really fine..!

Author's Note

i hope you all really enjoyed reading this......
pleaseeee review and rate it.....and its my request to everyone....!!!
regards
saumya

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i am touched and enlightened by your positive vibes here, and i think you create a spark of hope that we all understand one another as sentient, feeling human beings. we are always so quick to judge and/or fear what we don't understand and rather than embrace our hurt feelings or fears we lash out in anger or self defense. i know that i am just as guilty as anyone else of being too wounded by that which should never affect me. i am trying an enlightened path these days....and your words are definitely fuel for continuing on that chosen path. excellent write!

[Kristin Lee]

I love how you've created a rainbow of characteristics that reach beyond skin color. This is so light hearted, upbeat and everything I've come to expect from you. Very well done.

[Dana Alsamsam]

i have always believed that each person is built of a network of other people that they've met that impact or influence their lives. positively or negatively every single person is interconnected in huge webs and networks. this beautiful piece shows that no matter who they are or how briefly you knew them, they may have an influence on your life. you almost don't even need to have colored fonts, the words speak for themselves! this is one my favorite pieces of yours that i've read. good job!

[Rita L. Sev]

Every person has a lesson to teach us, a reason for coming into our lives. Well done, Saumya!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a wonderfully perceptive write...i am not fond of the colors...it takes away from the piece because they are not necessary..the meaning would still come across loud and clear...and it is a good one.

[SyberRose]

This brought tears to my eyes...its so true dear...everyone does have an impact on our lives here...they are people who I will always remember...hugss

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice and lovely poem...Thank you for sharing...:)