An Adventurous Child...

'sometimes when we sit and remember our childhood memories, they teach us many minute but precious principles to deal with life...these are some of them i discovered:)

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to gaze at the stars in sky,

their glitter,their shine , their spark

and the light,

filled me with huge delight..

and i always wondered,

what  made them shine so bright?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the butterflies

pink, white, green, blue,

and some with beautiful stripes..

and i always wondered,

what  made these creatures fly?

Since the time I was a child,

i loved to see the rainbow in  sky

i always waited for the heavy rains,

so that i could see it back again...

those seven colors

left me completely mesmerized,

and i always wondered,

what  imparted it,
such

immense beauty in the sky...

Since the time I was a child,

i loved seeing  birds

fly high in the sky..

and like all others

wished too,
to fly in the sky

and  always wondered,

why humans too, cannot

at least skid in the sky?...

Since the time I was a child,

i have been loving

every second of my life,

i try understanding and enjoying

everything around and nearby

and no matter how harsh is my life,

i live it like an Adventurous child

fighting with harshness,

 every moment in it i survive...

for if you live life as a child,

you'll never know 

what are worries and strife,

as they indeed aren't anything else,

but ' happiness in the form of pains disguised'

and as you walk on these stairs of life,

you'll somewhere clearly know,

that' you are the one who can create 

everything for you, by the only  attitude

you have towards life'

and that will tell you what's life...

 No matter people judge you today

to be wrong or right,

'always remember, that's never a full stop,

but only a comma of life'

live life like an Adventurous child

for a child never knows

what are worries,anger, rejection, and pain 

all they know,

is to sail through life

and dance merrily,

even in storms and heavy rains.. 

they never care,

what people say is wrong or right

they only do what they think is right...

and this is why

they are always filled with

 cheer and delight...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading this..
please give your honest review and feel free to mention everything you want to with respect to this write:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is amazingly good. The repetition, the content and arrangement of your stanze. Indeed, if this world is like a child, we will bear no grudge, no malice, no struggling, no killing, no bad would be inherited in us, because is not a product of childhood. But you see, my very good friend, Saumya, its never like that, not always. The world has grown oid and full of evil. But doing the right at the right time no matter what stand against would always make us smile and once more we become like a child. An Advanturous Child. Thank you so much for this poem.

[Krutika]

This made me smile coz it's nice to know more people who hides that adventurous child within! Loved it! 😊✌️

[Saumya]

Thank-you Krutika :) I'm glad you likes the write :)

[Annie S]

I bloody love this!! this is so much a flashback of my childhood even though i cannot remember most of them. As we grow older it gets tough and life is hard but a child sees the most crazy thing and innocent they may see they are gonna grow up never reading this piece of writing :) I love it :)

[Saumya]

Thank you so much Annie! :)

[Omikron]

I really loved the layout and the colours of this poem, it marries really well with the whole childhood theme. As for the poem, it's amazing, I've been wanting to write something similar but just haven't been able to put it to words, a task that you executed really well!

// O

[Saumya]

Thank you so much!
I'm glad you liked this piece. :)

[barleygirl]

Your upbeat attitude shines thru your words with much power to inspire & uplift the many who are living lives of quiet despair. I think people like you & me are naturally in possession of such upbeat thoughts, but most people are not. I really appreciate your message of optimism & I think there's a place in this world, especially amongst the young & the old, who need to read something like this every day to help keep their attitude in a good place.

[Saumya]

Thank you so much for the review :)
I'm happy you could feel the essence of this poem, and could relate to a good degree :)
People indeed need to enjoy these little yet the deep gifts from nature, that adds smile to the dull faces, and widens the smile of those who are already happy and smiling :)

Regards.

[hardeep sabharwal]

A lovely childhood memory piece, I like how you described those feelings, really nice work

[Saumya]

Thanks for stopping by, reading and the review of coz :)
Glad you liked my writing style!read moreThanks for stopping by, reading and the review of coz :)
Glad you liked my writing style!

-Saumya

[wordman]

read it again,loved the theme of it,birds,rainbows,stars the same stuff we all love
and who cares about insecure people

[Saumya]

Thank you Ron:)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Writergirl]

This is great :) I enjoyed reading. When you're a child, growing up seems to take so long and then when you're grown, you miss being a child again.

[wordman]

it seems you are in love with nature,very curious since child hood
and bring your memories to paper..great write

[Girl With A Pen]

Reading this, I felt like a child again. I miss looking at something with innocent eyes and curiosity overcoming fear of the world around me. This poem is wonderful, from every word to every image you paint, This poem is a delight! :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Child like from start to finish, sage advice from a little girls perspective. I fell in love with this poem!

Regards,
Al