Happy To Be Yours...

Just an imagination :)

Your eyes, 
makes me smile more, 
Your voice, 
has all cures, 
Your lips, 
 I crave, having more and more, 
Your hugs, 
alleys all feelings of being alone, 
I'm so happy...so glad....and so blessed 
To be yours.
 
I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

Minutes, Hours and Days passed. 
And so did the years,
oh how quickly they last. 
We fought, 
We laughed, 
We shared, 
And cared, 
We smiled, 
We giggled, 
We cried, 
And it all went through every year, 
In time and tides.
I knew you then, 
But i know you now, 
My frowns are replaced, 
By my blush now. 
I'm so happy....so glad...and so blessed 
To be yours.

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 


How could I not see this you, 
That I can see now, 
I was so blind, so unaware, 
and such a fool to not understand. 
Our fights made us wise, 
Our tears made us strong. 
And we were always there for each other, 
In all storms.
I always loved the way how 
You patched up. 
You wept more, when 
things were messed up. 
Your smile was something, 
That could heal my weeping soul, 
And your cuddles were something, 
That I relished most.. 
I'm glad that those arms are mine now, 
Mine forever, and mine for now. 
I'm so happy...so glad...and so blessed 
To be yours. 

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

You've made me smile, 
In times I felt like crying, 
You saved my soul, 
When I was all alone.. 
You perceived me, 
When I was expressionless.
You've made me, 'me' 
When I had everything
Except, that faith in me . 
You induced courage, 
When I lacked that in me. 
You taught me everything i needed to know, 
And made my world, 
Beautiful than snow. 

You're a pure treasure, treasure to my soul, 
And I'd love to be imprisoned, 
Imprisoned in your heart and soul. 
Not just for this day, Not just for the coming days 
But for the years, that I can witness more.. 
I'm so glad, so happy...and so blessed 
To be yours. 

I'm happy, happy to be yours. 

Author's Note

Honest reviews please.. :)
All corrections are much welcomed( send the corrections reqired in my inbox/mails ,please don't post them here)

Reviews

[Addict With a Pen]

I love this poem so much because it just brightens my mood. I can feel such a love like this, with the words you used. It's such a cute love story, almost fairy tale.
My favorite lines are:
My frowns are replaced,
By my blush now.
I love the imagery and the vibes from this poem.
Amazing job!

[Saumya]

Thank you so much! :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

Simple and your heart's words. Good one.

[Saumya]

Thankyou Prachi :)

[Katseye]

Absolutely beautiful... made me cry.

[Saumya]

Awww...:)
Thank you so much!

[Mauricio Montoya]

wow a love meant to be and truly blessed. thank you for sharing.

[Saumya]

Thank-you so much :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Reading this poem was like having life flash before my eyes.
It feels like there is a lifetime worth of experience in this work.
It gave me warm feeling. Nice one.

[Saumya]

Thank-you do much! :)
I'm more than glad to know, that this piece made you remember the lovely moments if your life :)

[George Peck]

Very sweet kind the way love should be great poem thanks for sharing.

[Saumya]

Thank you :)

[Aristede Craig Jr]

This was a confession and release of yourself to some one a surrender a white flag....but you must edit it a bit.... The words or chopped from the emotion when you need editing .....I love it though but don't be a prisoner be set free when your in Love dance with it.... Love is all.... And you should feel released from chains of some worth.... I love you my poppysilver keep writing

[Saumya]

Thank you so much for this lovely review :)
Mail me the editings required, please.

[Ruth]

A lovely piece of heartfelt flow...true love is a beautiful thing that evolves the soul...beautiful :)

[Saumya]

Indeed! :) I completely agree with you Poppy.
Thank you for the review :)

[wordman]

true love at it`s best,reads like a song

[Saumya]

Song? :) Maybe....I just tried pouring out all that I had in my head and heart, made it rhyme to mKe it a poem:) happy knowing it sounds like a song though :)
Thank you so much Ron!

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Inject Positivity]

This is very beautiful!!! It is packed with true and honest feelings and speaks of how the other person made the Poet's life more meaningful through the good times and even in the bad times when she had nothing to hold in to... I believe this is where the definition of true love sparks... I loved your descriptions of different circumstances to show us how that person makes you happy and why you are happy to be his... Well done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Saumya]

Thank you so much Dhiman :)
Wonderful knowing hat you enjoyed this piece so much!

[barleygirl]

Many times creative writers will describe love as "happy-happy-happy" & I'm usually kinda critical of such a shallow & one-dimensional viewpoint. Your poem is one of those rare messages that speaks in terms of "happy-happy-happy" but it's not superficial becuz you use many examples of what this happiness looks like & feels like, without everything being perfect, but describing a relatable & realistic life together. It's kinda like the song "happy" by Pharrell Williams . . . brilliant lyrics that actually make a person FEEL happy while listening to that song. Your poem has the same effect. It's contagious. It makes a person who might feel afraid to let go & love again, get up the courage to do just that. I love that you say this is "just imagination" (in your byline) becuz that makes it even more amazing, to describe extreme happiness so believably, even when it isn't necessarily your reality. I've never felt this way with a human, but I feel this way with God & with my pets *smile*

[Saumya]

Thank you so much Margie :) it is always wonderful seeing my pieces reviewed by you....your words are just so honest, and real:) I like that a lot!

Many, many thank yous:)
(((((Hugs)))