A Poem by Saumya

For my all time favorite, aunt Margie :)

Who perceives,
Your deepest mystery.

Who adores nature,
Just more, more than me.

Who's a fresh air,
That can freshly heal.

Who listens,
But will never judge ya 
To be silly.

Who can smile,
In her greatest miseries.

Who loves,
And sees all 
as a good beings.

Who's sans, sans a family,
But blessed and pampered 
And so loved her pets daily!,

Who'll prove,
'Age is just a number,
In intimacy.'

Who's heart, is so,
so lively
A heart, that pours love 
piously, incessantly.

Who dwells in a heaven on earth,
Nests in her alluring heavenly hearth,
Amidst the birds, plants and beasts.
And is so, so fond of nature's majesty.

Who's fond of nature and trees.

who observes things deeply

Who so loves writing poetry!
And Is a pro, 
At this proficient artistry

Who'll spread happiness,
Wherever she'll be.

who's a person,
You'll always yearn to meet

Is my sweet, 
sweet aunt-friend,
My dear aunt, and friend

© 2019 Saumya

Author's Note

Thanks a zillion for being such a wonderful friend of mine dear aunt-friend Margie! :)
It is indeed a blessing to have met a person like you, and I really hope that our friendship grows deeper with time *Smile*

Thank yall' for going thru my poem. I'm sure most of you know her already and would much agree with the poem. For some Of you all who don't know her already(and wish to know a little more pf and about her), here's a link that will take you to her page :

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Dear Saumya, Your poem about Margie is an absolute true portrait of her. She is brilliant and beautiful. She treats all of WC writers with the same care and kindness. She is a wonderful friend and extraordinary writer. Her reviews are phenomenal. Margie is an amazing lady and we all adore her.

Posted 4 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


4 Years Ago

I'm very honored, sweet dumpling! *golly gawrsh*

4 Years Ago

Exactly, Mrudula! :)
She's one of her kind, and we're all truly blessed to have a friend lik.. read more
Mrudula Rani

4 Years Ago

Uma grande beijo para você Margie Querida.
Saumya, Your poem is a wonderful tribute to our.. read more


A beautiful poem dedicated to a wonderful mentor at Writer's Cafe by a lovely person. Your words describe Margie's efforts being put up for reviewing writers' work here.

Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 2 Years Ago

A beautiful poem about a beautiful person

Posted 3 Years Ago

I love the way this is written. It's a meaningful and powerful piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago

This was so touching. I understand loss and felt it through your poem. Margie seems like a really cool person I wonder is she's in heaven and is really happy with this poem

Posted 4 Years Ago

Love this poem it’s so beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago

Each lines of this beautiful and wonderful composition is absolutely true. I think, she is not only a brilliant reviewer and a kind person, but also a skilled guide that inspires every writers and poets of writerscafe through her thoughts and teachings.
As a student is incomplete without a teacher, a small child is incomplete without his mother, similarly, all of us and wc is incomplete without her and we can not imagine wc without her.
Beautiful and attractive creation..
Keep writing..

Posted 4 Years Ago

This is a wonderful, beautiful poem celebrating family love. A certain gratitude is expressed here both as evidence of unconditional love as recipient and distributor, using your gift of poetry to express this on a platform from which others read and learn and feel inspired.

The poem starts (rhythmically, smoothly and fluidly) gathers kinetic momentum, tone and style depicted coherently with sweet suspenseful narrative, before reaching crescendo, a conclusive air like soft feather that lightly and lovingly settle in the praise of the name Margie.
'She' used here as a refrain throughout the poem, aiding the continuity of rhythm, also as a personal pronoun, with the mention of Margie's array of virtuous attributes, makes concept, content and context in sync.

Posted 4 Years Ago

That is definitely a winner
Very nicely done


Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Ah! That's a lovely compliment.
Thanks so much!😊
a lovely tribute to Margie who spends a lot of time on WC giving positive feedback.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


4 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your beautiful sentiments about the poem, Andrew😊 glad you liked the poem.
andrew mitchell

4 Years Ago

you have done extremely well on Margie
Great tribute to Margie.
Margie rocks.
And since it's Saturday, she'll be rocking all over the place.

Posted 4 Years Ago


4 Years Ago

Yeah! *High-fives*😅😊
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about the poem too😊

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Added on September 24, 2018
Last Updated on February 16, 2019




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