My love.

In the beginning

My love was thinning

That was,

Until she came along.

She brought hope

More than most

And so

I finally felt love.

It's been a few weeks

There are now a few tweaks

And a fear

That soon it will end.

So now I will hope

And pray that the note

Will just be an apology

And not the final bend.

But for now,

My love

I shall see you in another lifetime

As we might be the right people

Just at the wrong time.

I'm back again,

My love.

I'm afraid now

That soon we might end.

Last time

It was just a scare

But now,

It might be here.

I don't want to lose you.

Not again.

But as you sit away from me,

I realize - 

We're in the final bend.

Hello, my love.

The final bend

It already ended

I can no longer call you mine.

You seem to have fallen out of love

Only after a day or two.

I myself

Am trying my best

To live without you.

I may have found someone else

They care more than you ever have

I just miss the way you used to look at me.

I'm sorry

That we just weren't meant to be.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

damn impressive sav for one so young. look forward to watching you while you hone your craft.

ps, know it's tough to lose past work, but it happens to us all, and in time you will find a lot of what you fear is lost will bubble up to the surface again in new and unimaginable ways. that's the mystery and the magic of poetry, nothing is ever quite as fixed in place as you think, and everything in the mind is malleable.

good luck