Utterly Lost

...Whaddaya think? Another poem (obviously)...A girl is lost and wants to be found.

Utterly Lost

Lost in
a crowd,
I'm there
but not found.
My existance
means nothing,
But I'm there,
None the less.

Lost in
the shadows
I'm cold,
in the dark.
My only wish is
for someone to see me.
But just like
a one way glass,
I can see in
and they can't see out.

Lost in
my thoughts,
I'm there
only in presence.
My mind
wanders around.
But I
don't like it here,
I'm all alone,
and I'm scared

Lost in
the world,
I'm trying
to remember
My memories
leaving me slowly like dreams.
But I think
I know reality from fantasy,
And I know
no one will ever find me.

Author's Note

Yeah...uh...I really don't know where the heck I pulled this from...But I guess that's what happens when you have an overactive mind and a pen and paper near by...XD

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I love how your poetry really sweeps energy in and out of the world of ink. The alternating colors and overall flow worked stunningly together. While the theme is one that resonates with many people, you have taken it and given us something unique and merit of high praise.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[BLACKCRUSH]

Wow this is crazy amazing... I'm bipolar and this is how I feel alot and it's hard to explain to people. This piece was full of sadness and will reach people who feel this on such a deep level . I hope others read this because it really is a great piece and will be added to one of my favs. BC

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is really good hun. i love it very much

[justice]

the best stuff is written on a whim. true inspiration is great. Nothing seems forced and the words simply flow from you. It is really a great way to write. I also really like the alternating color scheme. You make the poem not only stimulating through words but in the layout of it as well. Well done. It is a great read. Thanks for sharing it here! All the best.
J

[The Cute 1]

i like this

[r]

This is amazing. I just love it. I love the font to, wif da colors and stuffs. It makes it so much more awesomeness.

[master squiggles]

HAHAHA YOU WROTE THIS IN CHORUS 8D Sorry... I felt the need to say that. I LOVED IT :O Well i told you i liked it in chorus already... so... YAHHH.