once

3/27/12

i woke up this morning

at 5:54 am to be exact

moaning with the pain 

of the feelings inside.

once my skin touched yours

i got impregnated by 

the smile of your laugh

and the coldness of your arm.

it was hurting beneath

the chest you kissed

near the freckles

you once loved.

now it is all gone,

your smell

your coldness

even the freckles

once you touched.

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Disappearance of fondness is riveting within the imagination.

Nice poem.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This speaks to you... as a reader... the lines are forth coming... the thoughts of what was in your relationship... the way everything use to be... and the fall of how everything turned back to nothing... I did like the lines:

i got impregnated by
the smile of your laugh
and the coldness of your arm.