Dreamwalker

I loved James Cameron's Avatar so much and it inspired me to write this.

I flew across galaxies from paradise lost.

Beyond the looking glass of my shadowed world

I see you move through the faint vastness

In a forest of willows and falls and fireflies.

I walk into a dream and you take me by the hand,

You lead me to your Eden, where wild horses run free

And the dance of dragonflies pirouette the stars.

Underneath the midnight’s lullaby,

You look into my eyes, reaching into my very soul,

And with your touch, your kiss, your warmth,

There is magic.

 

The dream became my hope in this obscurity.

I am torn between you and the world I left behind.

I am fighting to survive the wretchedness of reality.

Now I live through the same river of life

That flows in you and me, and together

Across jungles and cosmos, through twilight and sunrise,

On the wings of time, we fly

And this is freedom.

 

Now I give you my promise, my spirit is one with yours

And in your eyes all I see is a world of beauty

Where the gravity of love vanquished my fears,

The evanescence of my indifference,

You conquered my whole life and I am reborn,

Becoming one with you.

This new world,

This is paradise.

 

 

01.08.2010

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[Rc R. Vagilidad]

As well versed as you are, I guess the workmanship of this fairytale conspires mostly of what femme instincts you conjure to deliver inside an inspired realm. I've read so many works of yours, and perhaps I never get tired mustering the awesome mixture of darkness within a fairytale, and vice versa.

Not to mention this line:

The dream became my hope in this obscurity.
I am torn between you and the world I left behind.

PS: heheheh, ginbasa ko liwat para makaubra ka very constructive gid nga critique para ayus.. hahahah.. =D

RV

[Dante Balsote]

On the wings of time, we fly
And this is freedom.

You conquered my whole life and I am reborn,
Becoming one with you.
This new world,
This is paradise.

Transcends and thus become more than just descriptions of freedom and paradise, as if to say, "You are not a poetess; you are poetry."