Benumb

Her lhabias were my driving force,

and my efforts to get them underwhelming.

She's the object of my coincidence

and an unforged free will.

Traced from the perfect template,

our debt still unpaid,

the bond sealed in simple vision, lacking advice from the silhouettes.

The thread count intimacy, whispers and pestilent dreams.

Written spells of lies merge with  scripted woes tagged in telegram.

Tempered lovers behind the purpled haze.

Reviews

[Jonhoi Vaughn]

Timeless.................

[Jonhoi Vaughn]

It was good to revisit this. Your talent is an obvious one. You have tempered these words into something worthy! Good write=good read!

[BlessedLove]

Beautiful. I can say nothing more. I really admire this piece

[Jason Henry]

this may sound crude, but that was f*****g brilliant... ... ...f*****g brilliant.

[luke312]

Unbelievably Righteous. The words used were unique and...awesome.
This was an excellent piece.

[Broken Warrior]

Great piece. Abstract yet straight forward of the intimacy of love. Good presentation.!