Breaking Point

Breaking Point

A Poem by Kana Renee
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Sometimes the human Soul drowns within its core.

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How many things can you
 
Bring to the table?
 
How much baggage can you haul?
 
How many straws
 
On the camel’s back
 
Did it take
 
To break and fall?

© 2008 Kana Renee


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God, I don't know, but aren't you constantly impressed with just how much you can carry on with? Doesn't it just blow your mind how resilient the human spirit really is in the midst of feeling so small and helpless sometimes? Somehow we manage to scrape together another tomorrow and take in another breath! It's incredible how much we really can endure, isn't it?

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow.... very interesting piece of work... i love the boldness of the lettering to match the bold phrases you used.
nice work
-s.e.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2008

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Kana Renee
Kana Renee

Knoxville, TN



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