Soul Construction

 

Symmetrical soul construction

Posing with a function

All too massive, raw and real;

Quickness come to measure

Wild insight, Untold pleasures

Seeking hidden, unknown treasures

All to cosmic, pure, surreal;

Come, let us mingle in the sweet breeze

Feel it falling, flowing free ease

Let it take you down

to your knees

Breathe the spirit

 that dwells

within;

Begin the dance

of the destined

Free your body,

The essence is there,

The truth

 of infinite bonds prevailing;

Inhale me,

Inhale the Night’s air.

 

Reviews

[Whispering Aspen]

First let me say that this poem feels so liberated, so uplifting after having just read your poem 'Prepared' Which by the way I thought was very good, as is this. I found myself breathing a little more freely after reading this. I think the flow, being as smooth as it was enhanced the message. I would love to hear you read this out loud.
"Come, let us mingle in the sweet breeze
Feel it falling, flowing free ease
Let it take you down
to your knees
Breathe the spirit
that dwells
within;"

And it just keeps getting better. I really enjoyed reading this, if you haven't noticed yet, so I am going to end this babbling, unending compliment (at least I hope you see it as such) by saying I loved the tight finish. Thank you for sharing this one. It really is uplifting!