My Moment From Your Moment

My Moment From Your Moment

A Poem by Tbear
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A response to In this moment A Poem by alanwgraham

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I read each word, each line, with my heart
My heart, it beat, it quickened
My eyes welled up, heart sank, mood shifted
In my moment I read your heart, your soul
From your moment, compassion grew
In this moment, I love you

© 2017 Tbear


Author's Note

Tbear
If only we could cure the ills of the world with a sweep of the hand..but no..we can only put our anguish and misery into words on paper and hope to move the world to sanity

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I did enjoy this simple but effective poem. It made me think and it made me feel! Good work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really liked the sublime message this poem carries,Tbear. Very well expressed.
Along with responses to poems you can also try writing on contests theme and prompt, having tried myself I can say that it helps in enhancing the creativity. It will be fun too.
Powerful love poem! Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Very nice message of love. There is nothing more to say WONDERFUL

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tbear

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Martin
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7 Years Ago

You wellcome i realy love love poems
Thank you for heving commented on my story Rebella and the Camel. I liked this little poem, the analogy between reading texts and reading the doul, snd the feeling of ture love so beatifully expressed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tbear

7 Years Ago

I look forward to reading more of your work and thank you for your review..
I feel very honoured! Well done with this poem - words can be very powerful!
Regards
Alan

Posted 7 Years Ago


Tbear

7 Years Ago

Thank you Alan, I am fairly new to the site and am so grateful for joining up..have rekindled my lov.. read more

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