Drum and Bass

Drum and Bass

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

She sits with a smirk on her face
Tappin' her pen on the table
Moving her head slightly
Headphones over her ears
Loud beats drum into her holes

Cars honk horns 
People on phones talk
She sits smiling to her self
Loving the beat as she sits
Sipping her hot apple spice

Waiters and waitress come with orders and take back empty plates
People chat, mouths move but she can't hear
Her volume is up as it echos out 
Pen to paper she writes
Smiling at a cute guy near by

looking away her music ends
She pays for her drink and leaves a tip
Another song starts
She gives the guy a nod good bye and walks out the door
The sun shines on her face, followed by buildings shadows

Nodding her head again to the beat and drums on her headphones 
The guy follows and taps her on the shoulder
Turning around 
She smiles and kisses him.

hand in hand they walk together down the long street of trees
Listening to and nodding their heads to the drums and bass....

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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Awe! This is so cute! :) I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it. really paints the scenes well. good stuff!
Cheers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I Sit With A Smirk On My Face, reading your amazing writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is hands down a beautiful piece, the character of the person comes through so well. Great job. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is unique, like it a lot :)
Drum and bass is an interesting way of adding beat to this too, awesome love!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was great! I'm a music lover, and this poem really stood out. I didn't want to stop reading once I started! You must keep writing for me!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it, really impressive. This is so descriptive almost as if a picture is being painted in front of me. Awesome job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it,, check mines out

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can relate to this one :). Very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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