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Story for my creative writing class last fall.

I decided to rewrite this series completely. Odds are, it'll be only this book considering I want to change pretty much everything in the first one.

Free verse.

Prologue to "Before The Lobotomy." Enjoy, please no harsh reviews.

Chapter 1. Constructive criticism, please. :3

Chapter Two for "Before The Lobotomy." And there's a song that automatically stars playing. Please listen to that while reading.

Description on bottom. And please take time to listen to the theme song of this book. Kind of gets you ready for the tone of the book.

1 I can't get the image out of my head, that morning when I came downstairs and I saw dad dressed up like a girl. "Dad, what are you doing?" I a..

2 "I gotta go," I said, sliding out of the booth. We had been sitting there for two hours, talking about random things and singing more Panic! song..

3 "Get inside," I said, pulling on B.B.'s shoulder. He came in without a word. "B.B., do you want anything?" my dad asked him. B.B. used to come ..