Remembering Dad

Remembering Dad

A Poem by Michael G. Smith
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remembering when my dad was alive

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Seashores empty…
Strolling through the sand
Washing warm, the waves of memory
Here from where I stand

 

Whitewash sails
Jetting in the distance
Reminiscing fondly
Of my loving dad

 

He loved to sail
Longed to be free, to fly
I saw it, like loftng seagulls
As we cast off, the smile in his eyes

 

Although, worry in mine
With water spread so deep
Fatherly arms surrounding
Holding a son close to his seat

 

Capturing the rhythms of the breeze
He yelled, as took stern command
And harnessing gales onto canvas
All with steady hand

 

It was a wonder to behold
As he became the wind
And one with the water
Or did they… become him?

 

In awe...
We cut through wave
Like the glorious whales
He to a vessel, commendeering brave

 

Here, upon vastly open seas
Far… far... beyond the break
Was the young boy inside my dad
Again beginning to wake

 

He died, after that summer
Hence, solace and serene
And now, alone I stand missing him painfully
Reflecting, on a moment that only lives on in daydream

© 2013 Michael G. Smith


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a wonderful tribute, thoroughly enjoyed this, your Dad sounds like an awesome man. Fantastic memories to leave you with :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

7 Years Ago

Thanks, I miss him dearly. He died from cancer when I was 17. He loved to sail.
Ohh, Mike. You have lovely memories with your dad! I wish I can say the same thing. I have never been close with my dad... And there are very few happy memories that we've spent together. I really pray that we will be able to conquer the estrangement that has grown alarmingly great between us. Poignant write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

The blessing is you still have time mine run out. We weren't really close but we did have some bondi.. read more
I too miss my father desperately, reflecting on those daydream moments... this is a beautiful tribute piece, Mike. I can see father and son, walking on the beach, and feel the love that surrounds them...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

You have to remember the good things about our loved ones, but nothing replaces the pain of losing a.. read more
this is a lovely tribute to your father, you have some lovely memories. a bitter sweet write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


s y e

11 Years Ago

It's so touching Mike....
Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Did you read my other one called Father?
s y e

11 Years Ago

No I did not, I will check it out though.
A beautiful poem...simply gorgeous...one of my favorites...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

This one of those rare poems of complete spontaneity. Very little rewrite was done to this as it cam.. read more
Very Sweet remembrance Mr. Smith...Well Done... I know it sometimes it seems a dream..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Renee.
Wow, very sentimental and passionate words. It caught me, feeling sad, but I loved it =,)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

Yes, I know I will be with him again someday but I miss his playful spirit.
Beautiful! Well written and great imagery :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

That's a lot coming from another dad.
memories...always so hard to swollen but too precious not to retrieve...I have had alot of death...it makes me pale, stoned, but strong...days like your remembrance, hang close to me.. on a chain next to my heart. This is a very special piece and I am so thankful you allowed all of us to share it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

11 Years Ago

I could of been a victim. That sounds like a good title. I found my mother at the tail end of her su.. read more
That was great i think it your best so far

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 7, 2013
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Tags: father, dad, mom, sailing, beach, love, life


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