The Devil's Sex

The Devil's Sex

A Poem by Michael G. Smith
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The epidemic sin, tatoos and casual sex

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Red carpet is moraless scarlet letter 
Unfolding as the wind blown weather

Peeling away to skins on inked cartoons
And lust-er, all around and beyond her

 

Cleopatra, Aphreditie, Mrs. Jolie; Jezabels
Portraying sheer nudes in flagrant attitudes
Artists claim to be like minded men
Which fall away here too

 

They mumble forget the light of Christ
Until fantasies sacrifice the souls
Casualties of war in heaven then Earth to hell
One way ecstasies down long and windy roads

 

Are they ever coming back from the devil sex
Not as long it's kept, believing it's romance
Outward they will grow older and bolder
Rounded corners of a blackened mind offense

 

But, others keep becoming younger and hunger

Fame and fortune is all for generation Y
And where are any ideas of righteousness in this
Upon the walkways of life, stains next to spit

© 2013 Michael G. Smith


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Hear, hear, the words of wisdom! :) Wonderfully-penned, Mike.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

Thanks, many people want to shoot the messenger but I just tried to reiterate the words of Christ.
I respect your strong belief in your faith...it's when you hold
dear to your heart. I usually hold back my opinion, hold things back.

I'm of an opposite faith, and yes, I'm Jewish. I hold a strong belief in
Love, kindness and justice, my G_d believes in forgiveness,
Celebrating life, the here and now. Men and women have both been
Proven to be sinful....there is nothing wrong with expressing affectionate
Desires with one's we're attracted to as long as there is a deep understanding
Of where both parties want from each other, etc. and aren't hurting others
(Cheating, lack of responsibility, regarding sexual health.) A women can
Be full of lust, just as a man is...yet a man is celebrated with how
Many sexual
conquests he has. A women is condemn ed for it. She's suppose
To be submissive and demure, all sweetness and sugar, just shut her up,
And have her suppress her sexual desires. Secretly pleasure herself if need be,
(Oh but if that is ever gets out...she's sick!)
When she's alone. How fair is that? Humans are sexual creatures.
Regardless of whether they accept the light of Christ or not.

There is nothing wrong with nudity...G_d created it and the human
Body is one most fascinating machines ever created...again by G_d.
Should be more concerned when something is actually wrong
With the body.
Live and let live and love all, just keep a distance from those
You need to. We're all one. We have our own private hells
To work through to become evolved. Only G_d can judge us
When we reach our demise.

I honestly mean no offense, this is just my opinion on this matter.
In regards to this poem:
This is eloquently written with great imagery and flow. Great job!

Thank you, Frieda for pointing out that information
Regarding the Holocaust.





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

I'm only messing around girls. SHEEESH
Cryingkate

10 Years Ago

Rob, your ok.. it's all OK, No Cardinal Sins 3 hail Mary's will cover it all :-)
This comment has been deleted by this poetry author.
The Light of Christ is within.
The Christ relationship is thru Spirit not flesh.
It's taking on the mind of Christ.
Religious Dogma's and Conceptions born of Religious Gov. Rulerships have no place in the Spirit's relationship with The Christ.
I have found that those who judge and point finger at others are guilty of what they condemn.
They are so lost in their own conceptions of being pardoned that they become haters of themselves and hide this hate behind condemnation.
A True Love of Christ would be of humble Spirit and would bring word of salvation to others thru way of Love and kindness and bringing forth the light by way of Love.

"Let he without sin cast the first stone"
If you are throwing stones you should know that you need to forgive yourself first. Go find that light of true forgiveness yourself.The lack of forgiving yourself is causing you to throw stones at others instead of finding your own salvation.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

Amen, we'll said.
Cryingkate

10 Years Ago

Your sayings aren't so bad either :-) I hear you
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And what of those who practice witchcraft for good? Are they to damned to he'll?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

Good question, thanks.
Though I would not paint all celebrities with the same brush, labeling them as "sinful", I see what your message is here, Mike. Personal freedoms are wonderful, but one must proceed with prudence and think about the state of their own soul...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

But, we are all sinful are we not. My knowledge of their lives comes from my experiences of living t.. read more
Rita L. Sev

10 Years Ago

Not griping to the messenger at all. I respect your message, Mike. Everyone must find the path that .. read more
I love the exploration of lustful women in this piece. What I took from this was that everybody loves them yes, but their souls are damned to hell.

Keep questioning and exploring the dark corners of your mind! Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your awesome insights, it's that a majority of us don't comprehend the destruction it .. read more
Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

The miracle of Christ is that we have the atonement and through repentance to be cleansed of or sins.. read more
Mike I love the the title and the whole write simply amazing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

As I have found happiness in a more opened eye to eternal consequences I want to share that knowledg.. read more
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Mike you are not ordinary as you are man of wisdom
Dear Michael

First thing to say. It saddens me that I am the first to have reviewed this piece.

Your writing, which I consider to be quality, deserves better of us all.

Sometimes I read every word. I will at first. Then I will read again and again and just let the feeling of the piece take over.

I related to this piece.

Whilst I may have had more casual sex than might be regarded as usual in the world of those who do casual sex, I have always preferred the comfort and warmth of long term relationships.

Whilst all have failed, I am pleased to report, I am back in the morality and mutual love of what I hope to be my last.

Angelina Jolie, Aphrodite ... all symbols of the passing, the merely erotic.

Sex is passing.

But giving life a meaning, the light of Christ as you put it, righteousness last longer and are the only things that do endure and have significance.

Thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed and was stimulated by the read.

With my best wishes as ever


James

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael G. Smith

10 Years Ago

James, I reread your review and just enjoyed the fact that you acknowledge how our choices can affec.. read more
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James Hanna-Magill

10 Years Ago

Dear Michael. Thank you. I agree entirely with your philosophy. James
If you are inclined not to comment on this, please tell me why.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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