Our Unfettered Poetry

I will let you interpert

Our poetry...

A thousand times been read

Syllables contort tumbling

Under covers

Free verse unfettered

Beneath hot breath

Brail symbolic softens

As soon as alabaster wets

Lips’ reciting merely, what is

Or should be heartfelt said

 

Our poetry...

Sapidus to the taste

Licking walls

As licorice moisten

Is the dark, chocolate

Columns shadow cast

Through blinds

And legs of sunrise slats

Or perhaps, metaphor

Marinating juice passion’s hands

 

Our poetry...

Evermore in verse

Italic in all directions
Of sentimental waves

Strewn linen’s cryptic

Unmetered curves

In letter lorn lavender

Stylish fashion lace

And recite, recite, excite until

Withdraw from structure punctuates

 

Our poetry...

Stanza’s line by line alive

Moves the throb muscle and tis’ heart

Further as the ballerina saut-de-chat

Etching out pass sweet silhouette 

Tip brushed Dominican eyes

Mind is racing after what

Shall merely be defined…as

Poetry reiteratively serendipitous

Clever as a serpentine

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

sublime imagery and appeals to those who are kindred spirits. it has a nice flow and you use beautiful words to warm our hearts. excellent poem.

[Michael G. Smith]

Mockingbird thank you very much for your comments.

[rutherford]

Nice self reflection on the art of poetry. I like the note of optimism -- "a thousand times been read." (I hope). This work reminds me of the Robert Frost quote that free verse poetry is like playing tennis without a net.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, your reviews are very insightful.

[Pryde Foltz]

A fantastic meta-write. Great one.

[Michael G. Smith]

I'm not familiar with the term but coming from you I know it's write. I'm not to knowledgeable on forms as of yet.

[Pryde Foltz]

Cheers. Meta-poetry just means a poem about poetry.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Our poetry...Our life...Our soul.... You gave life to the definition of poetry. Good job, Mike! :x

[Michael G. Smith]

How about the poets high five, thanks Blue. Hey, by the way what's your favorite color, lol?

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahahaha. I hope I am not too obvious, Mike! ;)

[shallimarRose]

Oh My... Feels a bit erotic in its metaphoric content. I think this is simply exquisitely written . Excellent word usage.. I wish I could give a 200/100 .. shallimarRose

[Michael G. Smith]

Just this side off. I hope I left more for the reader to imagine. This is as close to as you may see me ever get. Thanks.

[shallimarRose]

Loved it. very thought out It felt.. Rose

[Michael G. Smith]

This is one of those up to three a.m poems and then rain started during the writing session giving more inspiration.

[shallimarRose]

most of my work is written in the wee hours and sometimes in my sleep.. lol Good Night Michael.. xo

[Michael G. Smith]

Good Night

[Rita L. Sev]

Poetry and passion - a perfect metaphor, Mike. Lovely sensual descriptions, this piece flows with the sweetness of affection...

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Rita.

[Missphit]

Cleverly and deliciously sensual written piece, when read aloud the words drip nectar off the tongue tempting me to lick my lips and yearn to feverishly allow my eyes to wander to the next line with hunger. A work that leaves me thirsty. Extremely well written piece!

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks. Now, I wrote this with our comments from the other day. I tried to keep in the realm of PG-13 and leaving more to the imagination.

[Missphit]

You have succeeded yet let my mind wander beyond PG-13