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My bones; they ache
my heart; it bleeds
my mind; a broken record of you
...you...you...you...you...

My life; a blurred reminiscence
of implausable improbabilities
hideous cliches
mountains to climb
oceans to swim.

I would have met each challenge;
slayed every dragon
to kindle
that warmth we both felt
and the love we feared
yet craved.

And this pain
I cherish
as all thats left
of us.

Reviews

[Itumeleng Molokomme]

aah. sad but really soothing. great write. This pain I cherish as all that's left of us

[Pól]

Thanks. Glad you found it soothing.

[Brianna Brie]

I am feeling you here my poet friend. It is exactly what I am feeling and would have said.

[Pól]

I'm glad you could relate to it & hope it eased your pain.

[Awakened Rose]

Such a beautiful piece. It tugged on on my heart. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Cherish the pain... yes, that is wise, for the pain reminds us of some wonderful times, too. Nicely done, Paulo.

[Itumeleng Molokomme]

very true it's like resisting the urge to cry because you feel if you do you will forget

[s y e]

Awh Paulo, this is such a sweet little dirty but sad all at the same time. No one wants you to be in pain....

[Pól]

if u live life to the full, pain is pretty much unavoidable, I'm afraid. If would be worse to not experience

[s y e]

Well that sucks... I guess we do need to experience pain to certain extents, it does suck though.

[s y e]

Oooh, this is so good. Even better than before - I didn't think that was possible.

[Pól]

thanks noodles- glad u like it