no name

one..two..three..four..

you count the seconds

one by one

staring at the locked door

staring at the dim light

listening to the ticking clock

tick tock

counting carefully

twenty-seven..twenty-eight..

time is passing

really fast

with each tick your heart hurts

you dont want to fall asleep

open your eyes

forty-four..forty-five..

it's getting cold

gotta stay alive

you can't fall asleep

you dont wanna get lost

fifty-seven..fifty-eight..

fifty.. there's no more sound

the clock stopped

stand up... something crashed

hide behind that crack

you can't move..

why can't you move

the light is fading

the door slowly opening

it is really dark

you're dead

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of thoughts and numbers. I liked the movement of the words leading to the strong ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cara]

Thank you for reading XD, I'm glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.