to the death of my grandpa

to the death of my grandpa

A Poem by Cara

I don't know how to react to death
especially when it's someone i know
yes..everyone dies in the end
of this only, i am sure

It's the first time i'm about to choke
and my words refuse to be written
afraid that he'll really be dead
if i ever finish this poem

it's hard to realize and accept
that one of your family is gone
we'll never hear from him again
he'll sit and talk to us no more

its ok, i mean that's how it goes
won't be long till we meet again
but know that i do forgive him,
and till the end of time i'll love him

i guess i won't finish this one 
let it stay a little bit more here
until i understand how to
treat the death of someone dear...

© 2017 Cara


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Well put... Also very sadly put... Heart-wrenching, in fact... That line...

*It's the first time i'm about to choke
and my words refuse to be written
afraid that he'll really be dead
if i ever finish this poem*

... Very haunting... I wish you the best... This was a great way to deal with emotions, and it was beautiful...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you for your nice words, glad you liked it
Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome, I certainly did



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It's very painful to accept the death of someone whom we love so much, but we can't avoid death...
well written...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

true, thank you for reading


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If you write a poem on someone you love... that person never dies...very good work..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words
No words can help you. Death of someone you love. Take times to understand. Some deaths teach us. To spend more time with the people we love. I'm sorry for your lost.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Cara.
Well put... Also very sadly put... Heart-wrenching, in fact... That line...

*It's the first time i'm about to choke
and my words refuse to be written
afraid that he'll really be dead
if i ever finish this poem*

... Very haunting... I wish you the best... This was a great way to deal with emotions, and it was beautiful...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

6 Years Ago

thank you for your nice words, glad you liked it
Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome, I certainly did

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