Nymph~

Nymph~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~decanting heart~

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Sad carapace

I am peeling you off

Following

Soft shell crabs

Into the joyous sea!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~in mythology Peneus turned Daphne into a laurel tree to save her from the amorous appetites of Apollo~dreaming through myth here the heart of the dillema is the same though my girl has chosen to be fluid waters in which to own her fate~
I have my moments~I don't even understand how they happen~ how the poem above births itself from my rereading the tale of Daphne~ now I'm over explaining which I never do~ so off for a latte~ and good morning~ =)~

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don't leave, i want to watch you sip your cup...oh my, look what's happening to you...i've never seen the like...i knew we shouldn't have come to the shore this morning...oh, how am i going to explain this...she's disappeared into the sea...i only wanted to touch...oh my, oh my...why did she have to go

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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Here again I find you giving me a smile.

...I swear I take too much from you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The exclamation point makes the entire poem wondrous! Thank you for this brilliant moment you've allowed me to experience :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be reborn,
Up from blood and foam.
Out of the oceans roar,
Venus reborn;
Drying in the sun.
Rid of the banal character.

Just had to add that, not that it needed anything...Love this poem

ice

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

meaning upon meaning tossed about in the rolling current...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be the first footprint on an uncharted beach. This was a great refresher to my insatiable appetite for the short and sweet. You have a knack to make the reader linger with your words. Absolutely excellent. Bravo, for your ability to capture the harmony of thought, feeling, and interpretation.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Succinct and to the point, this poem is a wonderful reminder for us all to shed the hardness of life and free fall into the oblivion of joyful living.

Linda Marie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet and short :)
Love it x)
I actually love all of your work :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I just need to read more of your work. You left me teased a bit. with this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Straight to the point with a million meanings to the five fluid lines that makes someone ponder the wonders of fate forever..
Once again (and I'm sure you're used to hearing this) you never cease to amaze my inner artist :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 12, 2010
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Tags: poetry, personal transition, soul shifts, mind revisions, transmute, metamorphosis, mythology, Daphne, innovation, from water to water, selene sky, pouring ink, bleeding onyx, books

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