Naming Girl~

Naming Girl~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~senryu~

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Cradle myth in bones

enceinte with pale moon daughter

father names her fate

 

 

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great first line
'moon daughter' -beautiful
last line's a mind blower

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And mother supports her ... what a beautiful poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful... so much said in so little words. The intelligent mind quivers...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"pale moon daughter" that image is just beautiful. A poem in 3 words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is "much" about this poem....
...and it does "make (perfect) sense".

The beauty of strict forms is in the challenge to the poet, and the reader.
Beauty is most certainly found here in this senryu.

enjoyed
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaitlynn~ then why don't you ask those who understand the composite of senryu and subtlety instead of dropping a rude little one sentence snippy comment~ or go elsewheres~ thank you for reading~

Posted 10 Years Ago


I don't get whats so 'MUch' about this??? it doesn't even make sense.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

What a way with words you have. I am always amazed by what you can produce. And this reads like a fairy tale ready to happen. Fabulous.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

First-class fairy tale!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow very short but very moving, I love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: senryu slayers, poetry, senryu, how girl got her name, selene, moon, lunar elipse, fathers and daughters

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