Kali Manifest~

Kali Manifest~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~senryu embedded in haiga~

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Kali Manifest~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trance cleaves girl in twain

hindbrain unbolts chthonic flood

disgorging Kali

 

 

 

 

Photocopyright:2010/vssmd/lilytotemarts/amusemusepress

 

copyright:2010vssmd/amusemusepress

 

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Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~for senryu slayers~ word of the day~
chthonic~[thon-ik] or chthonian [thoh-nee-uhn]: of or pertaining to deities, spirits, and other beings dwelling under the earth; of or relating to the underworld


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A cumulative sci-fi feel to this senryu, a la Species, the mythic reference and keyword converging.

Fabulous poster-like haiga version too. You could have a whole haiga poster line selling like hotcakes.

I love the powerful dynamics you muster in a flash. "Chthonic" is a very Scorpio-muscular word, which of course suits your Ascendant to a tee.


Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I had to look up Kali to get a perspective on the relation to yourself... and found out how fitting a symbol she is... the internal disgorged from the recesses of the mind, appropriate for a dark goddess whose appearance belies her personality...

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a fantastic write...love it ....feels my heart with warmth....is that strange?
lol...:)
Peace
Robin

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Well, I'd be on my feet clapping right now, but this headache appears to have one up on me. Needless to say, outstanding. Words as magical as when last I read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write, and the poster looks awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hands down remarkable. What a vixen you are.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such power unleashed here - loving the chthonic flood...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

brilliant stuff

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice, if not, sur-real senyru. But I'd recommend you change the last line. Because, 'Kali' is technically the goddess of death, and one can't 'disgore' the goddess of death herself. Or maybe you meant some other, and I didn't understand.. :)

Keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Hmm, Kali, vengeance personified; I like it, a definite thought provoker.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

too cool for school....loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: senryu, haiga, senryu slayers, wotd, group, kali, pop goes the hindbrain, crawling queen asp, selene skye

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