Girl Babylon~

Girl Babylon~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
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~one of those uneven nights~

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Now

That you’ve coaxed me from my shell

What will you do

With a girl

Whose arms unfold into eight distinct notes

Plucking atomic love from the nucleus of matter

And does it matter

How I bend my music to the will of the tides

While a cat’s cradle undulates by

With the threads of a modern day Moses

Who will one day find his mind inside a bottle

Of hard liquor

At the end of skid row

In tow

To his holy insanity

A Madonna dipped in hemlock

Following the pound of his staff

Against the eventide of endz

Blaring through the windows of dirty love

Commercials for extenz

Tipped the top hat of reason

To good ol’ Abe Lincoln rolling over in his grave

A stage in his eyes

Reflecting silk

Spinners pouring

Through the edges of his coffin

While I while away the underbelly of this final grace

My Thai limbs drenched in gold

Thighs around the sorrel belly of the sky

Eight arms in rubies wrapped around the waist

Of Wounded Knee

Atop, the Mesa at the third pluck of the string

A third eye in jade opens

On the Book of Revelations

From my mouth, glitter and confetti

From my palms, the open wounds of misrepresentation

My dance begins on a cloud

The Hopi Nation go about their day

Kachina dolls at eight points

Bodies pour out of a sandstorm

On knees

With locust eyes

Dust lies

I dance

Kali at my hip in steel

Pandora in my belly

Lilith in my sway

The w***e in my smile

Giving good word. . . .

“As ye think shall ye be” . . . .

And the corona of the sun flares

Burning words

Against the struggling atmosphere

MYSTERY, BABYLON THE GREAT, THE MOTHER OF HARLOTS AND OF THE ABOMINATIONS OF THE EARTH

 

Now that you’ve coaxed

A thousand of us from our shells

What will you do

With the messengers

 

Killing the beautiful delivery

Does not make the message vanish

Now does it

Only leaves another stain of Cain

On the patchwork soul of Man

 

 

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© 2011 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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I wonder at times how such a tiny girl like you can harbor so much soul.

My Thai limbs drenched in gold
Thighs around the sorrel belly of the sky
Eight arms in rubies wrapped around the waist
Of Wounded Knee
Atop, the Mesa at the third pluck of the string
A third eye in jade opens
On the Book of Revelations
From my mouth glitter and confetti
From my palms the open wounds of misrepresentation
My dance begins on a cloud

You're Pandora's Box, my lovely woman.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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“With locust eyes
Dust lies
I dance
Kali at my hip in steel
Pandora in my belly
Lilith in my sway
The w***e in my smile”

Devouring eyes, the essence of energy in her hips, punishing abs, the will to be on top, willing to please but at a cost, Eve fell at the realization of love, I wonder what the price is to find a women like that; all I have to give is my heart…

Great Write Selene!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant as always,

Matthew

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this part...."Of Wounded Knee

Atop, the Mesa at the third pluck of the string

A third eye in jade opens

On the Book of Revelations

From my mouth, glitter and confetti

From my palms, the open wounds of misrepresentation

My dance begins on a cloud

The Hopi Nation go about their day

Kachina dolls at eight points

Bodies pour out of a sandstorm

On knees

With locust eyes

Dust lies

I dance ....

Killing the beautiful delivery

Does not make the message vanish

Now does it

Only leaves another stain of Cain

On the patchwork soul of Man"


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love these poems of yours - you at your most descriptive and surreal - always so fresh and fun to read - some new life amidst the paradigmatic sterility on here! ha!! - I love so many lines - to quote one or two - "sorrel belly of the sky" and "On knees/With locust eyes/Dust lies/I dance/Kali at my hip in steel/Pandora in my belly/Lilith in my sway/The w***e in my smile" --- bravo!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful celebration and reminder of that which is women.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have brought to life the "beautiful delivery of the message" here. Watch her lilith sway as she delivers it. Forget the message.. remember the sway.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a creative tension and eloquent performance in these lines Selene, the first half of it wowed me as your words do have the power to 'wow' me [which does not happen very easily].

Let me display the lines that caught my attention:
1. Plucking atomic love from the nucleus of matter
2.Thighs around the sorrel belly of the sky

a nice mix of short and long lines. high props.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thi is outstanding I truly enjoyed the mixture of myth and religious philosphy that understates the true power of womankind giving only slight hints of the awesome power of the feminine mystique.
To me, a male the female has always been a mystery yet a wonderful one I am now and have always been in awe of the "gentler sex"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A brilliant, dark story...such beautiful imagery and story..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another masterpiece here, studded through with your signature wry wit and gritty reality. I always look forward to reading your latest offerings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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