Intuit~

Intuit~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

I’m into it

Like Alice into deep holes

Like Snow White into peep holes

Like Huggy Bear’s cheap w****s

 

Intuit on high wire

Tinder sipping wild fire

A stripper with a sign on

Sipping tears from wine swans

 

Hip tilt on a corner

Thumbing both sides of the holster

Action in traction

Young male thing vying for attraction

 

I’m into it

Like Cinderella’s slippers

I sidle, and I slip her

Up the crimson river

Between my teeth I grip her

 

I intuit

My mind is fluid

My skin is nectar

The flavor that bent her

 

I’m into it

Like Doris Day deep in pie

Like Daisy Duke with thick thighs

Like blue birds blown to bits in blue, blue skies

 

Pansexual

Pan’s nuptials

Fairy Tale residuals

 

I’m into it

This Intuit

A fish on the hook of an Inuit

In fishnet stockings

Waist in circles rocking

 

Got it?

Caught it?

Want it?

Intuit

if your into it!

© 2011 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


Author's Note

NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
~sometimes muse has a seriously f***ed up sense humor~this totally got away from me~

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I LOVE it!! The rolling rhythm and over-the-top wordplay is just exceptional. Each grouping builds to the climax - all in all so apposite to your theme:

I’m into it
Like Doris Day deep in pie
Like Daisy Duke with open thighs
Like a blue bird blown to bits in blue, blue skies

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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everything should get away from you... just saying

Its got song all its own, back beat strong, come hither motion on a vocabulary sea, waves tickling and tweaking, sensuality peaking, I dare you rock n roll stroll across the page...
What I wouldn't give to see Thomas from Gather reply to this one...

You really have no boundaries when it comes to your art, talent and muse infinite!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes the random fucked up ones are the best :-P
The dark humour ran through this, with the visual references of promiscuity. It was fun

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

could you please send your muse my regards? :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVE it!! The rolling rhythm and over-the-top wordplay is just exceptional. Each grouping builds to the climax - all in all so apposite to your theme:

I’m into it
Like Doris Day deep in pie
Like Daisy Duke with open thighs
Like a blue bird blown to bits in blue, blue skies

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 2, 2011
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Tags: poetry, seleneskye, wtf

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NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

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