This Killing Mood~

This Killing Mood~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

It collects in a globule at the corner of a scrape

a red cape

through space takes on motion between the quirky smile

and the dangerous tapping of a shoe on polished wood

soot on leather

gently toe the line

the white palm open for the drop of blood

caught

the paint turns burgundy with intent

splash of emotions

the work of art captures the three dimensional canvas

the condition of being alive

in an arena

where the walls scream

and the forest outside whispers with sharp teeth

the light bulb flickers with shadows

ghosts slip their veils

and everything from birth to this moment

collects its trails in the silver veins

of a knife;

tip and tap goes the shoe

tap and tip goes the buttered mood

tipped from a cutting board

into a hollow sternum

the fresh croissants spin through a dynamic air

peppered with spatial aortal blood

in midflight

 

 

copyright:2011vssmd/amusemusepress

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© 2011 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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hmm we can melt into your words ha - descriptions that coat the eyes in colour - "the light bulb flickers with shadows
ghosts slip their veils
and everything from birth to this moment
collects its trails in the silver veins
of a knife;" - Very jealous of the amount of gems you're knocking out!!!!!! brilliantly untuned, detuned and retuned as always!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lost myself in this craft.. could visualize every line.. Mind blowing work :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stellar. Your words are like jugular arterial spray that Dexter would analyze.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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love this collections of words and their placements
i can close my eyes and see

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think the lesson here is tragedy can happen anytime and anyplace, even during the simplest and most routine tasks. As always written in your unique way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such captivating eloquence, the dark overtones offer a warning to all that "All is not safe", remain vigil.

Wonderful piece of art!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a nice pleasant meal gone terribly wrong. Or terribly right. Reminiscent of Richard Kadrey. Very descriptive.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love your way with words. They flow so nicely.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMAZING DESCRIPTION, I loooove it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loved this, could almost feel the moods way of coming out insiduously. As always your poem has that extra dimension, something else I can never put my finger on. I guess you just cant bottle magic. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole
NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

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