Lustrous Chaldeon And The Mystic Of Discourse~

~shameless seduction from underLand~

I can modify granite days with pliable dreams
dream sheer modifiers
abreast  nioteric silhouettes and surging chromatics
while language slips its perfumed shoulder
from a alabaster cocoon, a garter around her mercurial immolation
seducing  butterflies
and bewitching mankind
on parallel  
sides;
artistic sensual equations
stimulating latch hook silk
the Loom of Us All between nimble rapture and moist fingers
sequencing fibers
through the dexterous  artistry of  dreams
slipping from a smooth center, dispersing  beatific  allure
from ‘tween her  Underlandy onyx eyes

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Reviews

[RainQueen]

What a treat early in the day...

Your art does, indeed modify granite days with pliable dreams. Your poetry colors in the grayness of the day-to-day.

The gift you and all the poets give is to lend a soul to earthbound life. To send the mind and heart soaring to the beyond.

and

"the Loom of Us All between nimble rapture and moist fingers"

To weave all those who can/will listen into a gorgous tapestry.

As always, breathtaking. Thank you.

[Lydia Blackwell]

an intimate look behind the screen of your silken dreams. imaginative and free. very soothing:)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I must agree with Rock And Roll Cowboy, your one of a kind and complex style of writing is one that no one duplicate, which makes your unique writes so easy to love. Sensational, wonderfully penned write. Nicely done.

~anna rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such alluring charm and seductive charisma. You are one of a kind never to be duplicate(for good reason)

[shultzfeather]

it rox Sellie, simmering magnifico you in your multi-layered style

[Aidz]

the use of language is subliminal, dipped in a web of cathode encrusted ink, soothed from within and the depths of underland.

"Did you smoke from the hookah?" dreamlike in the seduction of the purple cat

[Babe Roxx]

I see why RainQueen adores your words, I'm glad she referred me to you...you just flow it and teared each word it up in its wake...say it and be done with it...WOW...I am enthralled with such mastery. I am not much of critiquer, because poems speak for themselves...but your poem left me breathless.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a compelling and mystical write. Excellent work..xx

[Tim]

I don't know what you're taking about, but it sure sounds sexy.

[Robin]

Engime in the key of mystique

[asdarkeyesclose]

'slipping from a smooth center, dispersing beatific allure
from ‘tween her Underlandy onyx eyes'

language seduces us with the texture of a dream, its airy harmonics described wonderfully here until we're wrapped in her beauty, caught up on a journey that takes us to underland with its unfairy thoughts and tales. i love the way your poetry always lets me forget about reality just for a few precious minutes. stunning!