Hand in Hand

A religious poemt that I wrote a while ago, sorry, the end drags a little but I can't think of a way to successfully change it. R&R plz XD

 

 

Life and death,

Hand in hand,

No regrets,

In this land.

 

I face the sky,

Tears in my eyes,

Saw my life,

Flash before it died.

 

Memories spin,

A weave of fate,

Of drowned dreams,

Of worthless hate.

 

How did I miss,

My purpose in life?

Why was I born,

If only to die?

 

Why didn’t I accept,

The lord when he called?

Why can’t I now,

As my broken body falls?

 

What was that joy,

That filled my heart?

What was that pain,

That never seemed to depart?

 

Why can’t I cry,

Even though I’m still sad?

Why did I only start now,

To wonder about my life?

 

I just don’t understand,

Why I feel this way,

Why I now ask these questions,

When they can’t be answered anyway…

 

I guess I’ll go to hell,

And burn forever more,

I wish I let salvation come,

I wish I would care more.

 

So now I sit here,

With a knife in my chest,

Asking why,

I thought I deserved the best.

 

If you live as you wish,

You die forevermore,

But why living by rules,

You die only to live much greater than ever before.

 

Listen to these words,

I say oh please,

These are the words of a dying girl,

So listen to me.

Author's Note

mild warning, religious content, but hope u like. Please behonest on the review though, even though flaming isnt always aprreciated :P

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this...and it is true...people need to realize this...before its to late...Great job again :)

[Hyacinth]

cool!
i love it!
its cool and its very deep!
tnx for the review again!

[Jacqueline]

Wow, I would like to know the source of inspiration behind this.
Well written and quite powerful.
Nice job =]