Hand in Hand

Hand in Hand

A Poem by Blackrose

A religious poemt that I wrote a while ago, sorry, the end drags a little but I can't think of a way to successfully change it. R&R plz XD




Life and death,

Hand in hand,

No regrets,

In this land.


I face the sky,

Tears in my eyes,

Saw my life,

Flash before it died.


Memories spin,

A weave of fate,

Of drowned dreams,

Of worthless hate.


How did I miss,

My purpose in life?

Why was I born,

If only to die?


Why didn’t I accept,

The lord when he called?

Why can’t I now,

As my broken body falls?


What was that joy,

That filled my heart?

What was that pain,

That never seemed to depart?


Why can’t I cry,

Even though I’m still sad?

Why did I only start now,

To wonder about my life?


I just don’t understand,

Why I feel this way,

Why I now ask these questions,

When they can’t be answered anyway…


I guess I’ll go to hell,

And burn forever more,

I wish I let salvation come,

I wish I would care more.


So now I sit here,

With a knife in my chest,

Asking why,

I thought I deserved the best.


If you live as you wish,

You die forevermore,

But why living by rules,

You die only to live much greater than ever before.


Listen to these words,

I say oh please,

These are the words of a dying girl,

So listen to me.

© 2009 Blackrose

Author's Note

mild warning, religious content, but hope u like. Please behonest on the review though, even though flaming isnt always aprreciated :P

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I like this...and it is true...people need to realize this...before its to late...Great job again :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

i love it!
its cool and its very deep!
tnx for the review again!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Wow, I would like to know the source of inspiration behind this.
Well written and quite powerful.
Nice job =]

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on October 24, 2008
Last Updated on March 16, 2009



Mannheim, Germany

so yeah... nothing really to say here :P Im basically a writer and an artist-sadly for you guys, more of an artist, but I try with the writing part, and I like to think that every now and then I .. more..