A Poem by Blackrose

A random poem also rather old... has a sort of hint of fantasy and lore :)


Regrets overshadow,

The life I have lost,

Bring out the resistance,

Romance the Mistrust.

Do you remember,

A Time before this?

A Time when faeries,

Used to exist?

And in the Free World,

Where everything was bliss?

But ignorance they say,

Can often be missed.

So please don't forget,

The life that we once saw,

The Beauty within,

All that is gone...

© 2009 Blackrose

Author's Note

R&R please!!!!! Open for critic :)

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Wow, so sad, but i beliueve some can realte to this. reminsicing on an old memory that happend between them and their ex.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really liked this poem.
Certain words are capitalized on purpose, right?
I like that, it adds to the flavor of the poem.
Also, its short, sweet and to the point.

Just one correction, I think:
"I Time when faeries,"
Is that supposed to be:
"A Time when faeries,"...?

Great though, I really liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on March 6, 2009
Last Updated on March 9, 2009



Mannheim, Germany

so yeah... nothing really to say here :P Im basically a writer and an artist-sadly for you guys, more of an artist, but I try with the writing part, and I like to think that every now and then I .. more..