Ophidiophobia

Ophidiophobia

A Poem by Sirius King
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Ophidiophobia : abnormal fear of snakes This is apart of my "Phobia" series of poems, feel free to check out the others!

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I loved the way the
lies

Slithered off of her
tongue

Making me feel like a
grown man

Even though my
actions were young

Yeah I was dumb

And at the time

Dumb was fun

That’s until I was overcome

With her venom

Leaving my body numb

 

Only feeling the
after affects

Of this meticulous attack

Not realizing I was
trapped

I had become an easy
snack

Her voice was so seductive

Telling me I must eat
the fruit

Even though I was
reluctant

I hungered for the
truth

The knowledge of good
and evil

Marinated in its
juice

Lost in the
wilderness

Because I chose to
break this truce

 

 Blindly loyal

Constricted by her
coil

Her cold blood warmed

As my cool blood
boiled

 

Crushing everything
that was in me

Consuming everything
that was left

Keeping me alive-Only
so I can be

Cognizant of this
cruel  

And painful death


© 2012 Sirius King


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Man that is one fucked up Medusa! Great poem man

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sirius King

11 Years Ago

lol...thanx again!
like the structure and this verse a lot
"Even though I was
reluctant
I hungered for the
truth
The knowledge of good
and evil
Marinated in its
juice "



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx4 ur comment!
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FD.
Such a familiar feeling, unfortunately.. but nicely written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

yes unfortunately,,, but its all a learning experience, ull know better next time :-)
FD.

11 Years Ago

People who don't keep on following their heart, and start using their head, maybe. But that's kind o.. read more
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

lol i hear u
nice poem, the pains of love, it flows nicely and the rhyme is good because it wasn't overly done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx!

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Added on September 9, 2012
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Tags: Serenus, Raymone, Ophidiophobia, fear, snakes

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