Iatrophobia

Iatrophobia

A Poem by Sirius King
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Iatrophobia- Unusual fear of doctors This is apart of my "Phobia" series of poems, feel free to check out the others!

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Iatrophobia

(Poem by Serenus)

 

My body is stiff

As a tear rolls down my cheek

I’m screaming on the inside

But It’s impossible to speak

 

I hear a casual conversation

About school and kids…

I feel foreign hands

Invade my body

As they probe and dig

 

I hear the horrific sound of a saw

As my blood paints the walls

The center of my chest

Feels like it’s being ripped to shreds

With a million metal claws


I pray for an end to the pain

"JUST STOP!...

...PLEASE PAUSE!!!"

…But no one in this torture chamber

Answers my calls

 

My heart

Gripped and clipped

By the hands

Of an emotionless

Masked man

My agony he doesn’t notice

He’s focused on his tortuous plan

 

I’m open to the world

My ribs are exposed

My bloody 

Severed heart

Still beating

I wish my eyes could close


 

I wish they could hear

My silent screams!!

I wish the doctor could see!!


I FEEL!

HEAR!!

And SEE!!!

EVERYTHING!!!!


How Could This Be?!

 


© 2012 Sirius King


Author's Note

Sirius King
rough draft... tell me what u think




SONG: DR. FEEL GOOD

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Nicely done once again. Their is amzing detail n this poem. Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

thanx again Sunny!! :-)
Sunny Skye

7 Years Ago

No problem always a pleasure
Sirius King

7 Years Ago

:-)
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sirius King

7 Years Ago

;-)
Very good and descriptive, I loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

thanx again :-)
Very horrifying...more so than any monster. This does happen in real life. It makes me shiver!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

yes any medical mistakes while under the knife are very scary

thanx for reading!
Is it wrong that I am laughing?

This reminds me of the Hayden Christensen movie... 'Awake' i think

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

it is VERY WRONG Steven lol

that may be where i got the idea ...i'm not sure, or the ne.. read more
Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

sorry then ahaaa

(sorry for replying soo late. I had a glitch, and was never able to s.. read more
Sirius King

7 Years Ago

lol...its cool haha
Not enough anesthesia? Lawsuit!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

exactly! lol
I couldn't help thinking about TSA at the airport while reading this poem!! ..good poem man.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

LOL..That will be the next horror poem lol

thanx!
Sounds like a Coronary Artery bypass graft or CABG for short. Medical speak is heavy on the acronyms. If it's any consolation they do have a very high success rate. It's OK man I know you didn't get one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

7 Years Ago

yea its some kind of heart surgery, i've never had one,... but i thought it would be terrible to hav.. read more
Baby Ricochet

7 Years Ago

It's very rare but that does happen and just like your poem describes the patient can't move or spea.. read more
Sirius King

7 Years Ago

yea i think i saw a news report on it, its crazy
It was great. One messed up doc, but hey it was awesome! I suggest after you work on it than you enter it into a contest I think was called "Ready for halloween" somethin like that. U want the url?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David the writer

7 Years Ago

Actually I have some old horror poems. I thought I'd see if you'd read my new ones though. But you c.. read more
David the writer

7 Years Ago

So uhm I'll hit ya up with some links, kay
Sirius King

7 Years Ago

ok kool!

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Added on October 7, 2012
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Tags: Iatrophobia, Unusual, fear, doctors, poem, Serenus, Raymone

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