Not the same YOU

Met her after 2 years and she was nomore the person she once used to be.

Do you feel the same?
Can he die for you?

When I look at you,
I feel you miss something
perhaps an angel's wings,
your look,an incomplete zone of stagnant emotions,
I wont kill to be with THE YOU.

The confessions now are incoherent,
expressions obsolete,the magical feeling, a lie.

A vicious intoxicant drops
while going through old testament of love,
beautiful lies, tidy satin, hollow promises.

Do you feel the same?

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. wow ... you are on the extreme left of the x axis and i am on the extreme right of the x axis ... in two years ... out of which we were together only for the first seven months ... i feel overwhelmed by my soul mate's presence in the universe now more than ever before ... but this is so powerful that i nearly disintegrated after reading this poem ... only to realize that perhaps that poem is an expression of how you construe that disintegration ... my soul mate still misconstrues me ... i'm just saying ... you never know ... sometimes things just seem that way ... even when they're not ... anyhow ... this is a pretty powerful piece of poetry ...

[BlackEctoplasm85]

deep..and touching..
"A vicious intoxicant drops
while going through old testament of love,
beautiful lies, tidy satin, hollow promises".
loved this one..