Death and Mother Nature

Death and Mother Nature

A Poem by desertraven
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just another brain dropping...lol

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Death and Mother Nature

Death and Mother Nature,

my nemesistic pair

you’ve hunted me

all of my life

and haven’t caught up to me yet...

You chased me with storms,

hurricanes and tornadoes

You hunted me like prey

with near death experiences

to no avail...

You just want to

take me in for questioning, huh?

Well tell SATAN,

I’m not talking

As for you, Mother Nature dear,

I’ll deal with you later

Two of the most powerful

forces on Earth

Have been weighed and measured...

And came up. . . wanting.

Sandra Ferrara Gentry 2008

© 2008 desertraven


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lol, i love this! Stick it to those all powerful forces!

You hunted me like prey
with near death experiences
to no avail...
You just want to
take me in for questioning, huh?
Well tell SATAN,
I'm not talking
As for you, Mother Nature dear,
I'll deal with you later

haha.. great stuff! Enjoyed it..


Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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NICE FIEST! and the interweaving of cycles is wicked cool

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very powerful piece and very well done .... overall i thought you did a great job on this one.....

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oooo....this is good. I enjoyed this, it has a humerous quality yet powerful for mother nataure can be a most powerful thing. A great write!!!


Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

lol, i love this! Stick it to those all powerful forces!

You hunted me like prey
with near death experiences
to no avail...
You just want to
take me in for questioning, huh?
Well tell SATAN,
I'm not talking
As for you, Mother Nature dear,
I'll deal with you later

haha.. great stuff! Enjoyed it..


Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I get the sense of this being they fate verses free will... we sometimes must push against the things standing in our way in order to make things happen. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

haha, this was funny. I agree with Ron, i loved the part about taken in for questioning. I enjoyed the read!

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Arf, arf...really like taken in for questioning! great riposte to the forces that drive our lives...and us mad often!

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 12, 2008

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desertraven

Longview, TX



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My name is Sandra Ferrara Gentry. I am a writer, artist and no longer a stay at home mom. I went back to work in the restaurant business. I'm 44, a mother of 3 daughters, Samantha 23 , Kayla 19 and Ke.. more..

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