A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.

Only some truely care,the rest are just curious.


I smile and shine.

What they don't know is whats inside.

But do they want to, is the thing.

Can't they see I'm hanging by a string?

It's different when they're nosey.

And different when they truley care.

I  stand near screaming

For what, not sure, I despair.

© 2013 Oh Wow, Lovely.

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Not bad, but I think it's a little too brief - there's definitely room to expand. And yes, while brevity is the soul of wit, I still there's unanswered questions in this piece, and it's all a little unclear.

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Added on January 8, 2013
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Oh Wow, Lovely.
Oh Wow, Lovely.

Bristol , United Kingdom

~~I don't know why I am the way I am. Something makes me hate everything. Light up, Smoke up, Shut the F**k Up.I'm officially off the rails, you should try it. A little more of her is gone, I can see .. more..

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A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.