Freedom (Poem)

Dusk comes rapidly

Mocking jays flying freely

Enjoying freedom

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

freedom in expression, freedom in nature...captured so positively in this beautiful haiku.
j.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Jacob!! :)

[Kesha]

I agree with Yumna, your haiku's are quite divine, short and wonderful. I loved this, it provoked a feeling of the day ending sweetly

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Kesha!! :)
It's really appreciated :)

[Kesha]

You're welcome!

[Surya]

Freedom,...And it's feel free poem..I liked it..:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Surya!! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh this is a nice one. I think you're better at haikus than with the longer poems you write. Loved the image as well.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Yumna! :)
I feel like this image gives the poem a better feel and more warmth :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think so too!
You're welcome, Shaan. A pleasure reading this 😊

[Chase Dylan]

You are quite adept at the haiku style, my friend... It is a form of writing that always seems to elude me... Well penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Silente! I really appreciate it :)
Haiku's are really fun to make

[Chase Dylan]

"Fun", lol, you are welcome...

[Stacy Purvis]

Bravo! What a lovely haiku. I'm enjoying your new found love for haiku. :3

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Anastasia!! I love creating haiku's as they're short and sweet :)

[Ace St. Jean]

Love the haikus, short and sweet. Also, I LOVE the picture.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Ace!! :D Lol xD

[Najam Us Saher]

Very nice to read. Beautiful imagery.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Najam!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Short poetry and true use of words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[CAPOLAVORO]

You like haiku then. I could see a good image on this one. Write more. :) I need more feeling and rhythm.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :)