To be in your shoes... (Poem)

To be in your shoes... (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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The pressure to succeed

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If only you could understand
how it feels like
the pain, the agony
and the need to succeed

Everyone relying on you, alone
to win for all of them
keep the country proud
and it's head up

Applause's heard from miles away
to boost your spirit up
and if you make a mistake
rocks and taunts thrown at you

Feelings hurt and energy drowning
adrenaline rushing harder then ever
trying your very best to cover up
for that one mistake you made

Everyone think's its easy
then why don't they try
so they can understand how it feels
to be in your shoes

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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The last stanza speaks volume! It's easy to talk rather than really know how it feels to be in someone's shoes...
Good write, Shaan :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

Thank you Yumna!! :)
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, Shaan. (:
Great wisdom in your words.
"Everyone think's its easy
then why don't they try
so they can understand how it feels
to be in your shoes"
The above lines. We need to pay attention to. Each person had known different struggles. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

I agree, we each have different struggles!
Thank you so much Coyote! :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are right my friend and you are welcome.
Exactly....You portayed every minute feeling in this poem very effectively. Thank you so much for writing this. I loved it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Najam! :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Hah, you've copied down my thoughts, Shaan. I totally agree! If only they could understand us, if only they were not too quick in judging us, if only they saw life through our eyes, if only...well...The 'if only' endlessly goes on...anyway, this was a well written and relatable piece. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

No problem XD
Zoya

6 Years Ago

...Gosh xD
Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

Hahah gosh :D

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Added on July 30, 2017
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Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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