A Cold Embrace

Winter is here
The trees are bare

The cold wind has
You in it's snare

You scream
And fight

All through
The night.

Your stuggles decrease
But the pain doesn't cease

Your eyes slip close
As the wind finally goes

Now comes the hail
Your retreat will fail

For it wants you to stay
As you try to say

"Let me go"
It answers you "No"

All your hope as left
And you welcome your death.

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Rawr I loved it!!! Kinda dark, very cool, very visual. keep it up, you rock. :)

Amazing job!!!!!!

[Eric Cox]

This is really cool. I like it alot.

[Rima]

Great job, I like it! You can envision yourself in the picture you have painted in the poem!

[SilentDreamer]

Awesome, it flows perfectly. You can definitely picture it and see what's happening. Keep writing!

[theunknownchick]

1 word:COol
2words: Awesome Poem
3words: I love it.

Keep it up!♥