Murderer.

Murderer.

A Chapter by Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend
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The nightmares just keep coming and theres nothing I can do to stop them..

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I found myself walking through the forest, the cold wet earth beneath my feet squishing as I walked. Unknown to where I was going, I let my feet lead the way. The full moon shined down on me as a large clearing streched out in front of me, a large lake centered in the middle. The forest glistened in the silver moonlight, making everything look as if it was underwater.

It didn't seem real. The silver shadow the moon cast down on the whole forest,the way the water moved around me as I slowly steppedinto the lake, and the silence that came from the creatures of the night as soon as they caught sight of me.

Looking down on my reflection I saw how beautiful I looked. This must be a dream, I thought quickly. My skin looked more pale than normal and my face looked a few years older, but still held that unnatural beauty it always had. I wore a simple pair of jean shorts and a black tanktop, but as always I seemed to pull it off better than any normal human could. But what caught my attention was my eyes. I watched as their normal icey blue color began to fade, replacing itself with a bright and vivid silver. One just like the shadow the moon had cast down on the forest.

It wasn't real.. I wasn't real. I could only wish. No, dream. Dream that this was real. Dream..

Before I knew it everything went dark. The sound of the waves splashing agaisnt my legs soon faded and left nothing but darkness. Then I saw it. A beautiful face. A fimilar face.. My mothers face. But it was.. wrong. Sad, painfully sad. I wanted to go to her and tell her everything would be alright, but unfortunatly my legs wouldn't move.

"Ma.." I whispered, tears starting to form in my eyes.

Suddenly the rest of her came into veiw and I saw that she was on the ground, her hand clampted over her heart. She shook her head at me and tried hard to give me one of her reasuring beautiful smiles, but it also looked wrong. Full of fear, not only for herself but for me. Then I saw why.

He stepped into the strange spotlight, an unattractive grin on his face and a blade in his hand. Shock shook me as I realized their was blood on his silver blade, her blood.

"No," I trembled, still unable to move. "No!"

The grin on his face grew as he grabbed ahold of my mother long black hair and proceeded to pull her head back as his blade went to her throat. With one quick movement of his wrist he spilt her blood all over the ground that separated us. I watched her fall and land in that very blood.

I too fell, suddenly able to move again, landing on my knees crying so hard I could barly breathe. "how could you..?" I whispered, my voice corse.

 

I heard his dark chuckle and then suddenly I was in my mother position. His blade touched my throat slowly, the cold metal oddly burning my skin. He leaned in to whisper his final goodbye, "You'll be next.." Was all he said before the blade sliced clean through my throat.



© 2009 Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend


Author's Note

Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend
To be continued..



Reviews

I like it so far. Very descriptive. I like lots. :3

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is extremely intense and descriptive...i love it. i can't wait to read more!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how you changed the story slightly to fit what happens later on. This is turning out to be an interesting book. I can't wait to see how the entire thing goes, oh, how demented and cruel will the father get? Will he ever actually kill his daughter? She has to want to escape. Ah, the possibilities...

Posted 14 Years Ago


its very demented, in a interesting odd good way!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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