Solitude

 

Alone, the three of us

Just me myself and I

We watch the sun rise and set

We talk among-st ourselves

And I realize

Sometimes I

am all I need

Solitude!

bj smith 

aka shallimarRose

Author's Note

Feel free to comment/critique.. Thanks for reading.. shallimarRose

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

And I realize
Sometimes I
am all I need-- these are great lines.

I love the feeling in this piece, the overall concept that is driving forward the idea that a person can actually rejoice in the feeling of solitude. Sometimes being alone with our own mind is the best thing for a person; we are able to truly understand ourselves in these moments. Beautifully done.

[shallimarRose]

Thank you and yes.. I just wish the other two people in my head would stop talking sometimes... lol xo Rose

[cartera]

Ego Id and Superego conjoining to make the perfect whole as one with the environment. Smashing as long as one does not fall out with the others.
Nice tone and feeling.
ATB
Alex.

[shallimarRose]

Thank you Alex.. I am a Gemini so there are actually two of me (personalities) already.. hmmm wonder it that makes six? Thank you for reading and reviewing.. shallimarRose

[ShelleyA]

A very good write about enjoying solitude that is short, concise and succinct. Heartfelt and introspective. Well crafted free verse. Flow is good as is the line to line transition and breaks. Good depth of feeling. I can relate. Well penned. Write on!

[shallimarRose]

Thank you shelly.. xo

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome. Have a great day!