Little Jimmy!

This is an acrostic poem, "When The Wind Blows"

With no one found in the house,
He, little jimmy was found there, alone,
Enjoying the company of a
Nut eating squirrel, playing around the house.
 
 
There was nothing for him to eat
Hunger didn’t matter him,
Empty cans and candy wrappers was thrown all around
 
 
When all of a sudden, he heard a sound
Intruding into his privacy, someone had entered!
Not withstanding the sudden fear,
Dreaded feeling was seen in his young face…
 

But, not knowing who it was, he sat there praying,
Little jimmy then rose with courage, walked out and
Opened the door to see who it was, and found a
White tailed, furry poodle scratching his door,
Smirking at his silly fear, he took it inside to play along!


Acrostic Acrobats #1 ~ WOW!

Mar 8, 2010

• Acrostic Acrobats #1
• Little Jimmy!

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May 13, 2010

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Reviews

[wren]

this is really cute

[deeps]

This is so cute.

[St.Jimmy]

this is so cute acrostic poem of yours
this kinda poem i used to read when i was small
i love the picture of a little boy too
Keep up the good work!
~Aaradhya

[_thesovo]

this is cutee! i love the little boy in the pictures :)

[maryjaneuy]

very cute poem of yours! :)

[Lynn B Glover]

I like this poem, I feel so much compassion for the little one for being left alone. It takes much courage to open a door with no adult to protect you. Very sound writing. Your Friend, Lynn

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a tender, sweet write that comes alive in your flowing form. So peaceful and lifting!

[Ian]

This i nice poem to give me a visual look of what was going on and like your style in poetry GREAT WORK.

[emmajoy]

This is charming, truly is, even though there's a couple of quite worrying themes within it.

Clever acrostic work ..

[Wicahpi]

This has overtones of sadness mixed with joy at the end.
Aw sweet little boy in the image. This is a wonderful Acrostic!!
Thank you for entering it in to my "Acrostic Acrobats" contest :)
Good Luck!!