Naughty Ninny  ☃ ☀

Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)


                                  Naughty Ninny

Little ninny walked to school,

On the way she saw a pool,
Little ninny started to play,
Then her dress got stained in clay!

Never did her fear stop her from fun,
Forgot her school and played in hot sun,
Later she did take off her shoes,
On the road she heard cows moos.

To play barefoot was what she chose,
Little fish in pond nibbled her toes,
Giggling and wiggling she moved around,
Like a tiny squeaky bird she made a sound.

Enjoying her time, she jumped in joy,
She looked naughty like a little toy,
Water splashed and made her wet,
She was like tiny fish caught in net.

She went back home with mild fear,
Stood in front of mom and shed a drop of tear,
Her mom smiled and took her in,
Ninny walked in with a grin………


Oh So Happy!

Apr 12, 2010

Honorable Mention

Apr 15, 2010

You made it!

Jan 4, 2011

© 2011 Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

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Super cute :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's like a higher level nursery rhyme. I had fun following around the naughty kid's random wanderings. You sure portrayed a little girl in all her childish glory. Very fascinating, indeed.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is adorable.. aw

Posted 12 Years Ago

This was just so cute. Though the flow was a little off at times, it still was a cute poem. really cute. and Ninny! was an adorable pre-school name :P

Posted 12 Years Ago

Yes a nursery rhyme with rhythm and flow.
Great write well done

Posted 12 Years Ago

Congrats on your great winning nursery rhyme poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is adorable. Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

With a little tweek here and a little tweek there,
this would be perfect. Though it is adorable, the
flow (meter) could use that tweek to make it read
smoothly from the lips. Reminds me of days of old.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is very cute. The carefree, fun-loving quality of a child. They see the world as a big and magnificent place. I liked the way you ended this also. Very nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is such a cute poem. It's like a nursery rhyme. Great job:)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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21 Reviews
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Added on April 6, 2010
Last Updated on January 5, 2011
Tags: rhymes, nursery rhymes, kids poem, children


Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

Irving, TX

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