Naughty Ninny ☃ ☀

     
 
















         
                                  Naughty Ninny

Little ninny walked to school,
On the way she saw a pool,
Little ninny started to play,
Then her dress got stained in clay!

Never did her fear stop her from fun,
Forgot her school and played in hot sun,
Later she did take off her shoes,
On the road she heard cows moos.

To play barefoot was what she chose,
Little fish in pond nibbled her toes,
Giggling and wiggling she moved around,
Like a tiny squeaky bird she made a sound.

Enjoying her time, she jumped in joy,
She looked naughty like a little toy,
Water splashed and made her wet,
She was like tiny fish caught in net.

She went back home with mild fear,
Stood in front of mom and shed a drop of tear,
Her mom smiled and took her in,
Ninny walked in with a grin………

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 Silver Medal 

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Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Lovely poem. It sound like a kid song.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a celebration of freedom expressed through your words. That lightness of being a child and dancing in the puddles. Thank you for sharing the joy with us!

[emmajoy]

Although the meter's off and could be righted very easily.. I smiled the whole way through reading this .. it really does have a happy touch, both for children and adults who are only children grown up!

Have always loved water, still like being a ninny .. let's hear it for ninnies! :)

[Holly-Marie]

Cute =)
I like it how you show the fear of a child when she knows she's been naughty.
A nice family poem, Great write =)

[Ian]

This is something that kids can enjoy because the poem got the flow and its a good one. Loved it

[Samuel Dickens]

Very cute. I was a very naughty ninny when I was young and couldn't resist getting my feet wet.

[Simple_mee]

This is so sweet !! :) Very cute !!
Loved this !!

[deeps]

This is cute and so well written.
I like this, enjoy to read.

[Bette]

very cute this is something my daughter would do.

[Dev]

Aw.. this so reminds of someone I know well.. ME :P
haha.. I cud be poster girl for such mischief.. Nice write
I think the following are mistakes u can look into,, other than that a pleasurable read.

"Forgot her school and played in ^the^ hot sun,"
"To play with bare foot is what she chose," could be "To play barefoot is what she chose"