KingFisher

An acrostic poem in the form "abcd....z"

As I lay leisurely on ma bed,
Beckoning my hubby to come near,
Carefully showing him the bird,
Decorated in bright colors,
Elegant looks,
Furious while the catching the prey,
Gesturing him to watch the bird
Hiding from behind the window,
Ink blue colored bird flew from the tree,
Jetted in high speed towards the pond,
King in fishing, ah ha should admit!
Lowering from its height,
Made its way, sweeping in the water,
Noticed a shiny silvery fish,
Opening its beak, it sailed swiftly,
Penetrating its beak into the water,
Quick and easily catching its prey,
Rushing away from the place,
Splashing water all around,
Tripping up in the air
Using its feathery wings, it flew high,
Vividly coloring a picture in ones mind
With a memory that will never forget
Xanthic orangish colored breast and belly,
Yelling in satisfaction were its sharp eyes,
Zeal to achievement of catching a fish!




Sensational

May 25, 2010

• Simply Anything
• KingFisher

Blue-black Award

Jul 2, 2010

• BLUE
• KingFisher

Author's Note

An alphabetic acrostic poem in which each line or stanza begins with a successive letter of the alphabet....

Reviews

[James Paulin]

I enjoyed this poem and appreciate the difficulty with making the alphabet into a poem, having done one myself. Beautiful job!

[MagiCrystal]

majestic...simply Majestic..

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Got the form down to the letter. Well done!

[Simple_mee]

Great piece of art. U used the pattern so freely ... Awesome !!

[The Water Queen]

Artistic and beautiful. This is a stunning and lovely read and made me smile. Great job.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very artistic.. beautiful poem of a beautiful bird.. you did an amazing job on this alphabet acrostic.. you make it look so easy and effortless to write but it would take much to write something like this .. a beautiful poem.

Chloe

[A.Lee]

Great job! You used all the letters so effortlessly and it flowed beautifully. A very vivid image of this bird. Nice work.

[JENY]

Beautiful…….really nice….
You are a good admirer of nature…
Poem reveals it…..

[HorrorMaster]

Aww beautiful pictures and lovely bird pictures.

[Aussie]

This was awesome and very creative.I loved the imagery also,it was very vivid.Great work.