CAt vs RAt

                 CAT Vs RAT

Nee nana na na,
Tintana na na,
The little rat came skating on the floor,
Sweeee, enjoying as a skater,
He landed on a platter.

Yippy yuppy yupupey,
Slurp slurp slurpepey,
He licked the cheese in joy,
Singing songs as he nibbled the cheese,
Nibbling little by little he finished a piece.

Grrrrrrr wrrrrrr,
Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
The furry cat eyed the rat,
He pounced on the plate,
Alas! The rat escaped and he was late.

Ewwwwwwww,
Meowwwwwww,
The lady of the house screwed his ears,
Thinking that the cat messed the plate,
Leaving the one who actually ate.

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AWARDS/BADGES WON:

Winner

May 17, 2010

• Beautiful
• CAt vs RAt

Laughed till I cried!

Sep 10, 2011

• Make me laugh!
• CAt vs RAt

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

lmao cute

[Raivenne]

LOL - adorable.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This is a really cute poem, should be in a book for children.

[An owl on the moon]

This was like a cartoon come to life! Enjoyed the fanciful concept and the playful sounds. Wonderfully fun!

[profile deleted]

i found it hard to read.. but that's just me, different words in there.. but good concept tho. Sorry i suck at reviews which is why i never give them..

[emmajoy]

Laughing, a wonderful children's poem and the illustration's are great .. so like the noises you've created ..

[A.Lee]

Ha, I like this. It has a very fun, animated feel to it. Nice work.

[Sara]

woohoo, tom and jerry, love those little guys! :D you definitely got their antics down, and great use of onomatopoeia.

[R E Tree]

I loved Tom and Jerry when I was kid it was the only cartoon that was my favourite. I like your use of onomatopoeia I don't see many poems that have that. But this one is the first so far to have used that technique

[Samantha Young]

Amazingly funny! Exactly like Tom and Jerry (loved that cartoon). Awesome job!