Kids In Summer

                     "Kids In Summer ☀☂"


During hot summer days,
When sun blaze bright,
Child plays flying kite.

                  Playing in scorching sun,
                  Holiday time fun starts,
                 They run chasing carts.

                                     No classes to attend,
                                    Summer tents extend high,
                                    Exams end, fears fly.

                  They love catching fish,
                  Their prayers wish small
                  Tiny fish for all!

Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin.












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AWARDS/ BADGES WON:

Winner

May 20, 2010

• Any Poem
• Kids In Summer

 

 

Bronze Summer!!!!

Feb 19, 2011

• Summer!!
• Kids In Summer


 

Reviews

[Brokensoul]

Firstly I loved the graphics and the colorful font and the way you indented it.
It's high time that I saw something colorful in writers cafe.

I felt really nostalgic after reading it ,it reminded me of my summer vacations. How I used to wait for that period every year.

No classes to attend,
Summer tents extend high,
Exams end, fears fly.

This freedom from books and studies was something we all cherished at some point in our lives.

[HorrorMaster]

Aww cute poem

[Tina Kline]

This is delightful. A great poem about kids, summer and fun!

[Aussie]

This was cute.Made me miss my pud muddle days. :(
Haha,good work,it was really nice. :)

[shanise]

Thats really cute, it made me smile.. It reminds me of how I used to spend my summers when my cousins still lived next door...

[An owl on the moon]

I remember as a kid just loving the summer. Outside from dusk til dawn! You express this joy of childhood so wonderfully, and the absolute pleasure of being wet and muddy at the end of the good day!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great concept love the format that’s what writing is all about, venturing out.
Good job keep it up

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love summer and as kid I did all this .. now i watch my little one enjoying summer.
It is just as fun now as it was then. For school children summer is a dream..

You have the Than Bauk down well. I am not informed about poetry styles.
Need to learn..
I like this summery fun filled poem, good luck in the contest and a happy summer to all.

Chloe

[R E Tree]

This brings back lots of memories of when I was a kid. I use to love the summer as I use to eat ice-cream and swim in my swimming pool. I would worry about exams all the time and in the summer holiday my fears would go away

[Raivenne]

"Returning home at sunset,
Waiting to let in,
With wet dirty skin."

HAHAHA! I don't know what bemused me more. The memory of being the child getting dirty, and not understanding why my mother was so annoyed with me, or as the exasperated mother having to clean two filthy little boys and suddenly realizing I've got another seven weeks of this to look forward to. :)

Such a wonderfully lighthearted and sweet write.